Reviews for Broken
Beth Cyra chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Wow.

Given the title, I wasn't sure what to expect. This certainly wasn't it however.

That said, that's not a bad thing. The fic is old at this point, but I do have to wonder what had happened to Mai that would cause this, granted it is pretty much said it was Rape, and that is so horrible that could and does break people.

My question is more what/how Nao had interacted with Mai/guy that would make Mai act that way specifically. I know she said that Nao didn't help her, which is sad. Granted that is largely because I've become such a huge Mai/Nao fan, but more then that the idea that Nao had somehow missed the scum bag who could do something like that to Mai even if she didn't know her sucks haha.

Still great work. I know I've said it on all your Mai/Nao stories, but I really do hope you consider doing them again in the future.
TodayParade chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Definitely interesting.
samkaejung chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
thumbs up :) good work :D