Reviews for Slowly Breaking
Hachiko-kun chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
By the way I'm sorry if you think I'm just being rude or something but "Hichigo's" real name is Shirozaki but people usually call him Shiro so if you witte more fanfics plead use the original name.
Thank you for your time.
Also I liked your story it was good
Haneko Takahashi chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
omg he said hichigo-sama sofruckinghot
MidnightEden234 chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
That was great. *drooling*
MidnightEden234 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Ichigo: This is so wrong... you need to stop reading this.
Aw, Ichi, you really don't want your secret to be exposed?
Ichigo: S-Secret? What secret?
Hichigo: Aw, Kingy, no need to be so embarrassed. *runs hand down Ichigo's...*
I love those two. :D So much!
XD chapter 2 . 10/16/2013
One of the best two-shots in the whole world XD
Jasmine Lee chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
Well, other than the fact that you should have had a dub-con warning for the first chapter this was a rather enjoyable story. As Ichigo protested and was restrained/and taken without full consent then the first chapter really was 'dubious consent' at best; he may have 'agreed' in the end but he was also influenced to give in before then.
Alanis Strife chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I hate to tell you this, but you accidentally posted Chapter 5 of Mating Season. Love that story by the way, and I'm looking forward to the real chapter 2 of this one.
Kyouko Hori chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Shiro: *nosebleed*
Kuro: -_-" Shiro...your nose is bleeding. *gives her a tissue*
Shiro: EEEEK! *wipes blood with tissue* Great one-shot! It was hot and cute!