Reviews for this is what an ending feels like
kittykathy chapter 1 . 2/9
This was such a wonderful one shot. Whenever I read i can see the characters so vividly in my mind. I'm going to read more of your stories
moon strut chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
shiiiiit, angsty ereri will be the fucking death of me.
your pretty writing isn't helping, either.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Ahh so sad! I think you captured their emotions perfectly :)
IsyPerolla chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Oh my god, it was very sad!
Do not like to think in the Rivaille killing the Eren, he could have done anything else... But even if the end was so sad, the story was beautiful and you wrote it very well *-*

Write more fics this lovely couple!
Until next time
Kisses!
freshia chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
It's not too often that fanfics bring me close to tears, oh my gosh.

Your writing style is brilliant, and this is beautiful. It flows nicely and it doesn't feel like the Eren/Rivaille romance is forced, which seems to be a problem with a lot of fanfics on here. I certainly hope you write more SnK fanfics!
Orithyea chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
I don't understand how the end is in anyway awful. This is really nice and somewhat angsty. Death is inevitable, death always comes. Although, there are a lot of Rivaille kills Eren fics, I find your writing style beautiful.

So yes, this is awEful, not awful.
Kaytil chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
I think that the other reviewer meant "awful" as in "OH MY GOD MY EMOTIONS WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME THAT WAS AWFUL AND SAD AND OMG WHY".
In a good way. Awful in a good way.
Because that's what it would mean for me.
Basically, it was amazing. Please keep it up!
azab chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
This is aweful
Please write another. I loved ypur writing style but the end is awful