|Reviews for Fate Brings A Message|
| DutchGirl01 chapter 11 . 12/2/2013
Wow, powerful chapter. Loved the twist at the end.
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
nooooooo! oh damn it bella please remember who he is! :( glad she's okay.
| Vampgirl79 chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
Hi ladies! Yes, you do need to go into hiding! Haa, Im just kidding, sort of. Omg this chapter just wow, it about killed me, especially at the end. Oh good lord, poor Jasper ;( Poor Bella and Alice. My heart is breaking for everyone involved. Awesome writing ladies, I am more and more in love with this story as each chapter is posted! You two are doing such an amazing job! Now onto the rest of my review. What a mess, poor Jasper ;( The poor guy goes all the way to LA to go looking for Bella to set things right between them, to confess his love, finally and then he finds out she has been in a car accident. He isnt sure how to process all of this but once he finally does he has to get to her right away. I really like Riley and Garrett in this fic. They are such great guys, such a good supporting system for Bella, I see why she is such close friends with them. Thank God Jasper got a hold of Edward and poor Edward was flipping out because he couldnt get in touch with Jazz since Jazz's cell battery died. Thank god they talked and Edward told Jasper what he knew. Poor Edward is at wits end, consumed with worry. Thank god for Garrett and his connections, as he said being famous has it perks for sure. Jasper most likely wouldn't have been able to get a flight back to Forks till the next morning. But thankfully Garrett got them all on a flight immediately. That was awesome! Oh geez, that had to have been a rude awakening for Jazz for sure at LAX dealing with the reporters and paps. I cant believe the crap they said. Okay, I can believe it but Jesus still it was f-ed up! I dont blame Jazz for wanting to beta the crap out of that one guy over that vile comment he made. *shakes head* What a mess. Thankfully, Garrett soothed it all out, as he has dealt with that crap to now what to say and do. I loved Garrett's comment about Forks, that was funny.
Oh no, Jasper thought Edward lied to him about Bella's condition. I agree with Garrett, Edward probably just didnt want to worry Jazz more then Jazz already was. I feel so bad for all of them they are all worried sick about Bella. It sounded like she wasn't doing well at all. Then Jasper found out about Alice, poor guy now feels guilty that Alice was involved too. How much can his heart take? Thank God Alice wasn't injured badly and she will be able to go home soon. Its good too that Jazz got to visit with her. hmm yeah, I thought Alice had acted funny also. Soon enough Jazz finds out why. Something is going on between her and Edward. I knew it. I knew those two would get together, hee. I think its great! Edward is a good guy, he will love Alice and be good to her and she will be good to him. They deserve it. Still, it had to be weird for Jazz though to see that and figure it out. I felt so bad for Alice when she cried to both guys, she feels so guilty about what happened even though it wasn't their fault at all. Poor thing ;( Thank God Bella woke up and she will be fine! Everyone is so relieved but holy crap! She remembers Edward and Garrett but not Jasper? This cant be! Please ladies, this cant happen, no, no! Oh my gosh I will be waiting with baited breath till the next update. I feel so bad for Jasper ;( Damn this story is so so good! I loved it! Cant wait for the next chap but I understand you ladies have your other stories and real life to deal with. So I'll patiently wait. Again, great job! *hugs*
| Laurie Whitlock chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
Bella doesn't know who Jasper is? *lip quiver* That's tragic, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Loved this as always.
| Belieber Twihard chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
| The Walrus and the Carpenter chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
I did NOT see that coming. Good twist, and YES, you do need to go into hiding ;)
Nah, all good, and great story, lovelies xoxo
| Mrs.HappyAnarchy chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
I was thinking a hapy reunion but no Bella doesn't know who jasper is this is just great :( update soon please
| Alice's White Rabbit chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
Yeah, for this little cliffie, you might need to hide for a while. ;)
But, at least, Alice and Bella are physically all right. Hopefully, this little glitch in Bella's memory will NOT last too long. Poor Jasper. :(
| tawelephant chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
Oh these poor two can't catch a break. Hopefully she remembers soon.
| lissie boo chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
Omg! Please update soon! I absoultely love it!
| Belieber Twihard chapter 10 . 11/25/2013
| Vampgirl79 chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
Oh my god! Poor Jasper, I am about in tears here ;( *sniffs* Wow ladies what another incredible chapter, so beautifully written! To answer your question, no, you don't need to go in hiding, haa. I know somehow this will all work out, right? There will be an HEA in this story, Please? lol. Anyhow, on with my review. I felt so bad for Jasper when he first arrived in LA. What a rude awakening. He is used to the comfort and calmness that Forks provides. Being in LA is like a whole different planet to him, haa. I do agree with him about what he said regarding the paparazzi. Its just freaking awful how insane they are to celebs. *sigh* Oh it was for sure God who helped Jazz recall Bella's address. Thank god he got it and eh made it to her place okay. Though damn the reason he cant get a hold of her is because of the accident she got in with Alice ;( Thank goodness Garrett arrived at home. Though it was tough for Jasper to get his full attention. Im so glad Garrett picked up on Jasper's clue and he invited him inside his and Bella's place. Garrett seems awesome I really like him already. I think its wonderful how close him and Bella are and how they have helped each other to deal with the craziness that being famous brings them. I think its so sweet too that Bella added her touches to their place by having pics up of the people that she loves. I loved what Garrett said to Jazz about how he knows what its like to love someone but you have to hide how you feel for them. So sad though, poor Garrett, having to keep his relationship with Riley a secret must be very trying for them. It was cute too when Garrett teased Jazz saying that he should switch teams, haa. Wow so Bella and Garrett's place sounds huge, as Jasper put it, more like a house than an apartment. Oh man, I felt so bad for the guys when they found out Bella wasn't home. Poor Jasper was so nervous because he has his speech all prepared and he has so much anticipation to reunite with Bella again. But at least having Garrett's company gave him some ease as Garrett is very easy and kind to talk to. That was so sweet of Garrett to offer Jazz to stay the night, Bella would have wanted that too. I cant blame Jazz for his mind wandering thinking about him and Bella's future and what would it be like for them as a couple given that Bella is famous.
So in enters Riley. He seems great too. I liked how warm he was to Jasper right away and complemented on how cute Jazz is too, haa. Oh crap so the damn pap and reporters spread the news that Bella is cheating on Garrett with Alice? For crying aloud, what source did they have? Oh man now wonder Garrett is livid. I dont blame him. It's bs and ridiculous! Geez, that is craziness! But it makes sense as to what happened with Bella and Alice, the accident. Damn pap was trying to get a pic of them together. I freaking loathe the paps! Poor Jazz, that alone was too much for him to grasp to read that article about Bella and Alice's supposed affair but then to find out from Garrett that Bella was in an accident. Oh my god! I feel so bad for Jasper. After everything he has done to try and reach her, to see her. Its devastating. I am on the edge of my seat, dying to find out what happened to the girls. I really hope they will be okay! What a great chapter! Cant wait to read more very soon. Love to you both! XXOOO
| DutchGirl01 chapter 10 . 11/9/2013
Another great chapter, loved it. Can't wait what happened to the girls, are they alright?
| Laurie Whitlock chapter 10 . 11/9/2013
Another great chapter. Poor Bella. I hope that its nothing serious, wonder who "the source" is. Can't wait for the next update.
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 10 . 11/9/2013
i bet that was bella at the airport, and now she's been in an accident? oh noooo!