|Reviews for The Extended Honeymoon|
| ChuckFanForever chapter 8 . 3/7
Stumbled onto this story as it's been a while I've read some Chuck Fanfics, especially M rated ones, and I'm glad I came back! I just blasted though all 8 chapters and even just reading that is enough to make one hot and heavy! Especially since you describe the features of the heavenly Sarah Walker so eloquently. You also manage to write Chuck with the perfect blend of nerdy and sexy, bravo! Looking forward to lots more! (Nice tough with the Fake Name save there!)
| Graydon chapter 8 . 3/2
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
| GCG23 chapter 8 . 2/27
Pure perfection I tell u :)
I loved everything abt this chapter. They playful banter. The funny side of sarah. Everything. U certainly have a way with words :) n I can tell u that all your readers r never dissapointed with anything u write ;)
Keep it up. Can't wait for more from you
| Molotov chapter 8 . 2/27
I love their banter. It's really cute and sweet and sometimes sexy. And they broke the bed! Love it.
| DarkSpyder25 chapter 8 . 2/27
Great to see an update! Never paid that close of attention to the question you brought up in this chapter, but funny nonetheless.
| Molotov chapter 7 . 2/22
So here's the dealio.
I don't normally dip into the sexually explicit stories - not that I have a problem with them or with people enjoying them or even myself having enjoyed them - but I've never been too interested in these types of stories for the Chuck fandom.
But this story's description wasn't overly graphic and the word count led me to believe there was more to this than just smut.
And I was right.
I mean yeah, this story takes place in a train berth and is primarily about two people having sex. But you've made it so much more.
You -get- the characters. You write from their point of view so well that it feels like the characters from the show. You weren't bullshitting when you said "canon" in the story description.
You made this story into more than just Chuck and Sarah's sex marathon in a train in France. You've given us some insights into their love story, how new it is, and how badly they've been waiting for and wanting it. Sarah's fears at finally giving in to the emotions she's worked so hard to stamp out. Her nightmare, and how she dealt with it, was an amazing read. It was kinda beautiful.
So yeah. You done good here.
You done real good.
| Molotov chapter 5 . 2/22
It was this chapter when it hit me.
You get it.
You get these characters, you get their personalities, you get their relationship, you get the world they live in.
You fucking get it.
| Molotov chapter 4 . 2/22
I think it's sweet you trying to soften the blow of Sarah revealing her real name to Shaw with the teddy bear in this story. It doesn't make it true, but I admire you doing your best to correct that (canonical) mistake.
| IReallyEnjoyBeingOnThisSite chapter 6 . 1/25
This was a very beautifully written, and constructed chapter if I may say so myself. Great job.
| CaryR chapter 7 . 1/25
Full of passion and love, great story line. Thanks,
| Graydon chapter 7 . 1/23
Great chapter, loved the nightmare, Chuck's comforting and Sarah's reaction was so awesomely vulnerable.
| GCG23 chapter 7 . 1/22
I honestly can't explain how excited I was when I got this update notice! Pure joy I tell u! Pure joy!
For a moment there I thought u weren't going to update anymore. Oh boy am I glad u did
This story has just gotten better n better! I don't knw hw u do it. But each chapter is pure perfection! I love every single way that u have portrayed chuck n sarah here. Its honest n real n raw (esp the sex ;) lol that's just beautiful!
I hope this story can go on n on n on. Please don't take long 2 update again. Pretty please
| mssupertigz chapter 7 . 1/22
Very nice - a nice little break but as full of the love that they share...Liked the Shaw bit but wished it turned out differently - not a fan of Shaw but the fact that Sarah kept her focus on Chuck despite what she was going through - kudos -
| wilf21 chapter 7 . 1/22
Chucks a really lucky guy. And so is Sarah (not the 'guy' bit, of course). Great chapter thank you.
| IReallyEnjoyBeingOnThisSite chapter 5 . 1/1
NOW THAT'S WHAT I CALL HEAT! ON MANY LEVELS. I don't personally see anything vanilla about this chapter at all but that's just me.