Reviews for The Lion King Legacies - Book Two: The Tremors
A Forgotten Place chapter 22 . 6/6
How are the hyena trio still alive? Weren't they already adults when Simba was a kid?
A Forgotten Place chapter 21 . 6/6
Was Golgorath based off Thunderdome from Mad Max
A Forgotten Place chapter 20 . 6/6
The River Lords should play a bigger role in the books since they're one of the few large carnivores in Africa that can kill a tiger 1 on 1
A Forgotten Place chapter 19 . 6/6
Already it was obvious that Rafiki hadn't killed Marsade and that this part was only there to fool us into thinking Marsade was already dead.

Not accusing or anything. That's actually a good thing. There's just no way an important and mysterious character like Marsade would simply be killed off this early
A Forgotten Place chapter 18 . 6/6
Nice chapter. Where did I read something similar to this?
A Forgotten Place chapter 17 . 6/6
Not sure why the Asian pride is so stunned about the fact Scar killed his brother. Such things are commonplace among lions. The next lion who wants to be alpha drives out or kills the previous alpha and his progeny to be the head.

Other than that, yeah I expected Calin to survive this.
A Forgotten Place chapter 16 . 6/6
Another Ammit reference in this chapter.

But yeah this chapter was the one I referred to in some of our PMs. Kiava should've gone to Mt. Tempest with Zuri, abandoned his friends, and lived out the rest of his life in peace.

He shouldn't be forced into becoming a puppet on behalf of dead kings trying to reassert their fallen kingdom.

And the survivor, I always suspected the survivor was either Sarafina or Zira. One is the oracle. The other is the survivor.
A Forgotten Place chapter 15 . 6/6
Impressive.
A Forgotten Place chapter 14 . 6/6
Nice fight
A Forgotten Place chapter 13 . 6/6
Cool.

Bane actually reminds me of the Skesis race from the Dark Crystal. Their bodies decompose at an accelerated rate and the crystal needs to absorb the sun's energy to allow the Skesis to live longer
A Forgotten Place chapter 12 . 6/6
I thought the song was pointless but nice chapter other than that.
A Forgotten Place chapter 11 . 6/6
Koron is the only cub I actually like since he's the most brutal and in touch with reality.
A Forgotten Place chapter 10 . 6/6
Why didn't Bruce step in and just throw the leopard cub into the nearest tree?
A Forgotten Place chapter 9 . 6/6
Nice chapter as always. The cubs finally met the oracle.

Amun, personality-wise, seems pretty similar to Mortread. They both seem pragmatic and cool-headed, more likely to reason with the enemy.

Why did Rish'ut try to kill Harrin? Doesn't he hate Sekmet as well? I don't see why Rish'ut would get at Harrin for speaking truthfully and harshly about the fact Sekmet's attack was an abject failure with no strategy
A Forgotten Place chapter 8 . 6/6
Nice.

Though I wish you named some of the Shai'tan's soldiers non-native to Africa. Like reticulated pythons, grey wolves, or mountain lions for instance.
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