Reviews for Beast
fatima343 chapter 5 . 10/3/2014
More ch plz
oghren chapter 5 . 2/27/2014
Still feels a bit rough to read but good. Keep up the work and update soon.
oghren chapter 4 . 2/27/2014
Interesting chapter. It's a bit hard to read at points in the story. So you might want to look into finding a beta to read over and correct things.
oghren chapter 2 . 2/27/2014
Another good chapter. Though some parts of the grammar could use a bit of work. Besides that it was well written. So keep up the good work.
oghren chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Good start. Can't really tell where you are taking the story though that is sometimes a good thing. However is Naruto older or the same age as the rest of the rookies? Either way good beginning and keep it up.
Kelborn Ordo chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
i like it. needs more
Jfitzgerald chapter 5 . 1/26/2014
Please update again soon. Thanks.
Shadowprice chapter 5 . 1/7/2014
this is great you should make more
Guest chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
Why is it in every fiction Naruto has to be attack. Couldn't you author write something different than that.
gunsou chapter 5 . 12/24/2013
Hm... Naruto is still too passive in this fic. Cmon self defense please.
LS14 chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
I love this story
marco2o chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
Awesome story keep on updating and thank you for the story.
newmoon26 chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Just a quick question, is naruto older than the "rookie 12"?
loretta537 chapter 3 . 12/19/2013
this is a good story so far, I cant wait to see what will happen next
Bluesnowman chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
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