Reviews for The Crimson Knight: War of the Earthbound Immortals
GMW chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
(Here's one. He's the son of Dark Magician and Dark Magician Girl at the Spirit World, but is raised by a mother and a father (and they're dead). He takes care of himself. He's strong.)
Name: Vincent Gray
Age: He looks 10, but is immortal.
Looks: Short shaggy purple hair, green eyes, normal skin color, black tank top, black jeans, black combat boots, small tattoo of a Dark Magician with a staff on his right arm (Shows that he's a signer)
Personality: Smart and cunning. Don't underestimate him.
Signer, Dark Signer, neither: Signer, he's the son of Dark Magician and Dark Magician Girl.
Friends or loner: Looking for some. (He's not mean)
Enemies: The villains
Lives: Las Vegas, Nevada (In a mansion)
Deck: Magicians
Rival and/or love Interest: I dunno.
Likes: Purple, Dark Magicians, Magic, Myths and legends, reading
HATES: Evil, mean people, being told what to do
(Here you go.)
Spectrumsigner chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Well, the story is nice but there are some mistakes and some missing words. However I do like it a LOT. I'll send an OC.
JulCan1987 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I like this story so far, looking forward to seeing where you go with it. I sent you message for a OC, I hope you like it.
Iblis jr chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Name: Ryu Hikari

Age: 17

Looks: tall spikey black hair, wears a red sleeveless collared jacket and a long sleeve skin tight shirt underneith, wears a pair of black jeans and white red and black sneakers

Personality:serious during duels but happy and go-lucky when with friends

Signer or Dark Signer or neither: Signer

Friends or loner: Friends

Enemies: the dark signers

Lives: (i don't get this one)

Deck:
Starlight deck

Monsters:

Starlight warrior
lv3
light
Warrior/effect
Once per turn you can target 1 “Starlight” monster on your field and change it's lv to a lv between 1 and 4, that monster's effect is negated until your next endphase.
Atk/1200 Def/1000
Aprnc: a knight with twin glowing swords in white armor and a blue cape.

Starlight princess
Lv3
light
Fairy/tuner
if your opponent controls monsters and you do not you can special summon this card from your hand or graveyard. Once per turn you can special summon 1 “Starlight” monster in your hand.
Atk/700 Def/400
Aprnc: a child-like-girl with short white hair and a knee long white skirt with a blue crown on her head.

Starlight beast
Lv4
light
Beast/effect
If you control 1 or more “Starlight” monster, special summon this card from your hand.
Aprnc: a white tiger with no stripes clad in blue white armor.

Starlight gardna
lv4
light
Warrior/effect
if a monster on your field is selected as an attack target, you can special summon this card from your hand, this card becomes the new target.
Atk/0 Def/2800
Aprnc: a white armored knight with two shields that form a star on each arm.

Starlight Falcon
lv4
light
winged beast/tuner
If you control 1 or more “Starlight” monster, special summon this card from your hand.
Atk/1400 Def/1300
Aprnc: a white falcon with blue and white armor.

Starlight caller
Lv3
light
spellcaster/effect
once per turn you can add 1 “Starlight” monster from your deck to your hand.
Atk/500 Def/200
aprnce: a small girl in white robes with a big blue war horn.

Starlight titan
Lv7
light
warrior/effect
each time this card destroy's a monster on your side of the field you can draw 1 card from your deck.
Atk/2700 Def/ 1900
Aprnc: a collosal being in white amor

Starlight giant
lv8
light
warrior/effect
once per turn you can target 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it if it's attack is less then this card's.
Atk/2800 Def/2400
Aprnc: a giant wearing white and blue armor

Starlight Pixie
lv 1
light
Fairy/tuner
if you control 1 or more “Starlight” monster on your side of the field you can special summon this card from tyour graveyard or hand.
Atk/100 Def/100
Aprnc: a small fairy with four wings of light and wears a white skirt.

Kuristar
lv1
light
Fairy/effect
if this card is used as Synchro material for a LIGHT synchro monster then draw 1 card.
Atk/300 Def/200
Aprnc: a glowing ball of light with two blue feet and green eyes.

Galaxylight Rogue
Lv4
dark
warrior/effect
you can tribute this card to special summon 1 lv 4 or lower monster from your opponents graveyard to your side of the field and that monster's name is treated as “Galaxylight Rogue”.
Atk/1500 Def/1000

Galaxylight Archfiend
lv6
light
fiend/effect
this card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by banishing a “Galaxylight” monster from your graveyard. Once per turn if this card is destroyed by battle you can banish the monster that destroyed it and special summon it to your side of the field.
Atk/2400 Def/1800

Galaxylight Leo
Lv4
light
beast/effect
If you control 1 or more “Galaxylight” monster, special summon this card from your hand.
Aprnc: a Puma blue and white armor.

Galaxylight Gardna
lv5
light
warrior/effect
if a monster on your field is selected as an attack target, you can special summon this card from your hand, this card becomes the new target.
Atk/0 Def/3000

Galaxylight Thunderbird
lv4
light
Thunder/tuner
when this card in normal/flipped/or special summoned, you can special summon a lv5 or higher “Galaxylight” monster from your hand.

Kurinova
lv 1
light
fairy/effect
if this card is used as Synchro material for a “Starlight” synchro monster then draw 1 card.
Atk/300 Def/200

Galaxylight Marauder
lv5
light
warrior/effect
during the battle phase this card gains 200 attack for each face up “Galaxylight” monster on the field.
Atk/2000 Def/1500

Galaxylight Nova
Lv6
light
Pyro/tuner
if this card is normal summoned or special summoned you can special summon 1 lv 4 or lower “Galaxylight” monster from your graveyard.
Atk/1900 Def/ 0

Galaxylight Crusher
lv 4
light
warrior/effect
if this card destroys a dark monster, you can remove that card from play.
Atk/2000 Def/0

Galaxylight caller
lv1
light
fairy/tuner
once per turn you can add 1 “Galaxylight” monster from your deck to your hand.
Atk/500 Def/400

Spells:

Star constellation
normal spell
summon as many “Starlight” monsters from your hand as possible that are lv4 or less.

Star Fusion
quick play spell
you can send from your hand or field cards listed on a “Starlight” fusion monster to the graveyard and that monster is special summoned to the field. This summon is treated as a Fusion summon.
Star draw
normal spell
for each “Starlight” monster special summoned this turn draw 1 card.

Galactic gathering
continues spell
once per turn you can special summon 1 “Starlight” monster on your side of the field.

Supernova!
Quickplay spell
Special summon 1 lv 6 or higher “Starlight” monster from your graveyard, at the endphase its sent back to your deck.
Starlight storm
normal spell
for each “Starlight” monster on your field, destroy 1 spell/trap card on your opponents side of the field.

Starlight devestation
quickplay spell
If you control 1 face up “Starlight Titan” you can destroy all spells and traps on your opponent's side of the field.

Contellation wave
continues spell
each time you summon a “Starlight” send 1 random card in your opponent's hand to the grave.

Galaxy blade
equip spell
equip to a face up “Galaxylight” monster, that monster gains 1000 atk points and cannot be destroyed by card effects.

Star sabre
equip spell
equip to a face up “Starlight” monster, that monster gains 500 atk for each “Starlight” monster in your garveyard.

Traps

Star gathering
continues trap
once per turn you can special summon 1 “Starlight” monster from your deck but it is sent back to the deck at the end phase.

lost Star
Continues trap
once per turn you can special summon as many “Starlight” monsters from your hand but they are sent to the graveyard at the endphase.

Starlight Bridge
normal trap
if your opponent declares and attack that targets a lv7 or less “Starlight” monster, negate the attack and special summon 1 “Starlight Dragon” from your extra deck.

Cosmo wall
counter trap
if your opponent special summons a lv 5 or higher monster, they cannot enter their battle phase this turn.

Cosmic Blast shield
continues trap
twice per turn you can negate an attack the targets a face up “Starlight” monster.

Synchro mirror
normal trap
if your opponent synchro summons a synchro monster, target that monster then special summon a synchro monster from your extra deck with a level equal or less to the targeted monster. This summon is treated as a Synchro summon.

shining star descend
normal trap
once per turn you can tribute 1 “Starlight” monster and special summon 1 “Galaxylight” monster from your deck, hand, or extra deck.

Extra deck:

Starlight Dragon
lv8
light
Dragon/Synchro/effect
1 tuner 1 or more none tuner
on the turn this card is summoned, draw 1 card for every “Starlight” monster summoned this turn.
This card cannotr be destroyed by battle. Once per turn you can use one of these effects.
Negate the effect of a spell/trap that targets a “Starlight” monster and destroy that card.
During the battle phase, send 1 “Starlight” monster from your grave to your deck and increase the atk of a monster on your side of the field by that monster's atk and def.
Atk/2500 Def/2000
Aprnc: galaxy eyes photon dragon with stardust dragon assualt mode armor and white scales instead of photon blue.

Starlight Magician
Lv7
light
Spellcaster/Synchro/Effect
1 tuner 1 or more non tuner monster
once per turn, you can negate the attack of a monster that targets a “Starlight” monster on your side of the field.
Atk/2400 Def/2000
Aprnc: Dark magician girl with white and blue clothes and sky blue hair.

Starlight Collosal Guardian
Lv10
light
Warrior/Fusion/effect
“Starlight Titan” or “Starlight Giant” “Starlight Gardna”
As long as this card is face up on the field, your opponent cannot attack another monster, if this card is in defense mode, it cannot be destroyed by battle.
Atk/3800 Def/4000
Aprnc: a 7 story collases with blue armor and a body made of starlight

Galaxylight Dragon
Lv10
light
Dragon/Accel Synchro/effect
1 Synchro tuner “Starlight Dragon”
Once per turn you can activate one of these effects,
if an effect activates that targets cards on the field, negate the effect and destroyed all monster on your opponents field and deal 200x the number of monsters to their life points.
Send a “Starlight” or “Galaxylight” monster in your graveyard or hand back to your deck and negate the effects of all face up monsters on the field except “Galaxylight Dragon”.
Atk/3800 Def/2500

Galaxylight high Magician
lv10
light
Spellcaster/accel synchro monster/effect
1 synchro tuner “Starlight magician”
Once per turn you can send 1 Starlight monster in your graveyard back to the deck and this card gets that cards effect until the end phase of the turn the effect was activated.
Atk/3200 Def/2500

Rival: Crow Hogan

love interest: Isuka Shinzo (an Oc i'll send in)

Likes: friends, dueling, and rootbeer floats

Hates:evil, boredem and spicy food
The Silver Magician of Chaos chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Nice job on the new chapter of your story! Keep it up!
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
great cards
Whitelilygirl chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
This is great! I can't wait for Kairi and the others to show up! You've have definitely gotten better at writing and I'm glad your re-doing this story. Remember, I'm always her to help if you need a beta!