Reviews for What Pancakes Drive Us to Do
Shadedfeather chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
Sooooooooooooo cuute! I just read the whole thing and it was all awesome! _
Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 8 . 2/27/2014
My thought train while reading this:
"shut up Matt you know you love him"
"Shit Akbar is adorable"
"stop being so sarcastic (even though you have a point)"
"You need some ice for that?"
ye, you're a good writer! I look forward to seeing more from you - your stories always make me smile.
HolyRomanVixen chapter 8 . 2/24/2014
*cue the awwwws*
This is so awesome! Please continue!
OtherworldlyArtist chapter 8 . 2/24/2014
Suprise! (Though, it is funny to surprise someone by telling them every five minutes while you're writing the story that you're going to surprise them. XD Still, I am thoroughly happy and surprised!) Now, for once, I can finally leave a real review since I didn't beta five seconds beforehand. XD
It's beautiful. I loved how you showed a new sort of side to their relationship. It still has the lovely teasing, the warm moments and the cursing/blushy Matt, but I really applaud how well you changed the more "dominate" position in this story. Normally, that's Matt, but how well you transistioned to Akbar "sassily" controlling the situation was well done. :D I highly enjoyed Akbar knocked Matt backwards. Silly! It was his own fault. XD Matt's crude comments, that are meant to make someone back off from the vulgarity, are just that much funnier when Akbar gives comeback, unfazed. And, friend, I totally love that last line. It is so Matt and brings it together perfectly. XD
I just really, really love how amazing you are at bringing together little details of their characters and playing them off one another. It's glorious.
Oh, and I wanted to say that when they went to the park, I totally thought they had milk and it was going to go bad because they were going to lose track of time. Or that they had eggs and when they kissed, they dropped the bags and Matt notices only after and is all like: "DANGIT!" *has to go back to the store in his newly excited condition* XD
*gushes* I really, really loved it! Thanks for making my day awesome with this great story. :)
phoenix warrior rising chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
I adore this pairing! Please make more! *7*
Masaki-Hanabusa chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
*Flail* Damnit Akbar, you are so damn cuuuute!
I think the comment about flag made me puke rainbows and cuddly animals in the best way possible.
Masaki-Hanabusa chapter 6 . 11/6/2013
Matt you are the most fan-fucking-tastic boyfriend ever. And Alfie, I'd punch him if he was my brother.
I love the hidden meaning behind flowers.
Sorry it's taken me so long to review.
Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
I'm fairly sure I follow one or both of you on tumblr
and am pretty happy I found this account and story
so dont mind me, I'll just read MattxAkbar fics and plan my own
cannoWrite chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
I thought this was cute :3
Wolfen Artist of KilGuin chapter 5 . 7/16/2013
I'm so glad you've been righting more 2pPrucan stories I love them! I hope fir more in the future and ill definitely try my hand at writing a few. Also I love your name for 2p Prussia but I have to say that UT sounds familiar. I swear I've heard Akbar before I just don't know where. Any help?
yaoiqueenrulzu chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
Soooo Cute!
cannoWrite chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
This is really cute, and I can also see Matt calling Akbar Birdie :3
Masaki-Hanabusa chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Damn that was cute. Especially Aky cawing in response to being called Birdie.
You know, I never related the head tilt to a bird until this. It makes sense now.
They are so cute.
cannoWrite chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
Masaki-Hanabusa chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Yesss! Finally it happened! In the most wonderous of ways! ;u;
Get married you two, and make wonderful pancake a la mode together!
I absolutely love Akbar and his sassiness
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