Reviews for The Commitment
Oaron chapter 20 . 6/18/2014
I miss story! Please post soon
Guest chapter 20 . 6/13/2014
we're almost to the end...have enjoyed this journey so much. Really hope you finish this story for all of your readers. Thank you!
momy791 chapter 20 . 6/11/2014
Hi, this story is truly Amazing ! But will you update it soon ?
DustyDesertBoots chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
I've just come back to this story and it is just as good if not better second time around. Some of the best tension, inner turmoil that I have read.
Bravo!
Guest chapter 20 . 6/1/2014
I have seldom seen a character come up with so many different excuses or convoluted logic as Jane manages throughout this story. Any person that intent on self sabotage is nowhere near ready for marriage. Poor Maura. She really does need her head to rule over her heart...
kissdagrl chapter 20 . 5/30/2014
I just found this story yesterday and I haven't done anything else but read it ever since. What an incredible, extremely well written journey. I've enjoyed ever second of it. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift with all of us.
Smc123 chapter 20 . 5/30/2014
Where r u I'm missing the story update soon ...
bethchilds34 chapter 20 . 5/21/2014
Wow. Just binge-read this in a few hours. I wasn't sure if Jane was going to come back, but I hoped that she would. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/12/2014
God what drama.
luckypenguinbuddy chapter 20 . 5/9/2014
Wow! Sobbing now. I'm so wrapped up in this story I have now words to explain. Just that I love it and can't wait for more.
Henri Jane chapter 20 . 5/7/2014
D I totally love this! Please please PLEASE tell me there's more!
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MedJuris1 chapter 20 . 5/7/2014
I know you wrote this a while ago, but I have to tell you.. .it really was a great story. I have read many "falling in love" stories between these two, but this one blows them all away in one really important way - timing. I have read great smut and great romance, but the timing sometimes feels off. It's like one minute they are totally platonic and the very next they are falling into bed. Your patience was incredible and you brought them around without rushing a single minute. So.. I just wanted to say thanks for a great story.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/4/2014
Yay! They ssud it! Marvelous!
Guest chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
Oh my you are really an amazing writer. This is the most intense sex between Jane and Maura i have ever read to date.
LilithL2 chapter 20 . 5/6/2014
wow...
amazing story
amazing evolution of the characters
amazing everything!

i loved this story! ;) congratulations! i'm putting you and your story as a favorite ;)
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