Reviews for The Demon Emerges
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19
Ignore thugbunny. He is a immature fool with a Poor vocabulary.

It lacked a Begining and build up. But it was a Good start.

Why Not redo this.

Make Tsukune the Son of Yusuke and Keikio.

power levels

Yokai Rank and power level:

Beyond S Class: Over 1000

S Class: Over 100

Spirit class and power level

Beyond S Class: Over 3,000,000

S Class: Over 18,000

A Class: Over 1500

B Class: Over 200

C class : Over 80
cegi85 chapter 1 . 1/14
Next chapter plz.
Thugs Bunny 009 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Get the fuck out of here. Like that pussy hole Tsukune could ever be a Mazoku. You pulled that nonsense right outta your ass.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Got potential. You should make a rewrite.
TsurugisFlame chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Huh. It could use a touch up on grammar and vocabulary, but the story itself seems like it could have potential. I hope that you do somehow tie this in with YYH, because frankly, that would be quite awesome. The only criticism I have is that you didn't reeally build up into why exactly Tsukune and Issa were fighting, you just kinda threw us in there. I'm sure explanations will come though, so don't take it too hard.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Is tsukune a descendent of yusuke? Update please!
Oniix chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Very nice please update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
pretty cool way to start
JulCan1987 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Interesting way to start your story, looking forward to reading more of it.