Reviews for Harmony Potter: Starfleet Raised
enji-benjy chapter 22 . 6/28
Now Dumbledore is headmaster again?

This has been a good story, I've enjoyed reading it, but the number of inconsistencies is immense.
enji-benjy chapter 21 . 6/28
So the Minister is a 'he' and the head of the DMLE is a black man, what happened to Madam Bones?
enji-benjy chapter 18 . 6/28
I thought Dumbledore lost his Chief Warlock position after the 2nd task?
& when did Madam Bones, Minister for Magic, get a sex change and become a 'he'?
enji-benjy chapter 13 . 6/27
I thought you said Fawkes had left Dumbledore over him placing the fake Stone trap in the school and putting students in danger? Why is he suddenly back now?
HairyLimey chapter 22 . 5/25
What no 24th Century Wizards?... Well that's disappointing great story but I would liked to have seen the Wizards oh well.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
wtf is this gay shit you sick fuck
Bad Wolf chapter 22 . 3/14
The epilogue was NOT, as you say, "on the weak side." It was absolutely perfect. I thought that having the "Q, what the HELL?" scene from the other perspective to finish the story on was perfect. The only actual issues with this story were some structural issues, grammar/spelling here and there, and a couple of minor inconsistencies. Those aside, the story was absolutely brilliant! To be honest, I clicked on this story expecting to read only a chapter or two thinking this type of crossover story could never work. You proved me wrong and I am glad you did. I love this story!
Bad Wolf chapter 18 . 3/13
I feel I must point out two moderate inconsistencies in this chapter.
1: You have Dumbledore still as the Chief Warlock. I am almost positive in an earlier chapter, you had him stripped of his positions other than Headmaster and even that he eventually stepped down from.
2: You implied that Fudge was still the Minister when Amelia now holds that position.

Those aside, this is still a bloody brilliant story! I adore this in ways I didn't think possible. Well done.
Bad Wolf chapter 14 . 3/13
Just gotta say... even those this story is bloody wonderful... if you hear a voice in your head as you read, their names are too damn similar lol.
Kinjo2k01 chapter 22 . 2/12
I loved this story... great work
Guest chapter 22 . 1/23
ah man i wanted to see what happed to the wizards in the 24 century
Rainbow Prime chapter 1 . 1/22
Aw...I remember this story now, and there was no reason for B'Elanna to be paired with Seven! Not to mention the fact that I have since been spoiled by people that understand that Snape was, in the end, a hero. Sure, Snape wasn't a good teacher, but s/7619993/1/Calculation explains, quite well for a piece of fanfiction, why that was. Speaking of the Voyager pairing, I prefer Janeway/Seven, or Janeway/Chakotay. Janeway ignored the Omega Directive in order to allow Seven to experience divinity, and the Janeway/Chakotay pairing has that episode where Janeway and Chakotay are stranded on a planet because of an illness that that specific planet's atmosphere is vital in keeping in check.
Jimbocous chapter 22 . 12/25/2019
Thanks for a great read. I really enjoyed this.
Jimbocous chapter 11 . 12/24/2019
Odd there was no scoring after the task.
cko2 chapter 17 . 10/8/2019
Cool little story with not much action on thevmegic side. But no big loss.
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