Sad this awesome fic seems abandoned

I love this! I do want Robb and her together or her and Jon! And I love/need her to be friends with Tyrion. Actually would want her with him. Imagine how he would feel knowinfg about magic and being with someone as quick witted as him

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Gods will it kill you to let them show some magic at the start? they are wizards for a reason!

I dont get why theres a bunch of haters. Its a good fic. Baring in mind that Harry hasnt gotten to know Sirius yet, its valid that he would adjust better to a life in Winterfell where Eddard treated him well and there are people supporting him. Hermione hasnt really learned the error of her ways. Shes headstrong and always believe she is right. So yes, it makes sense. Theres a monotonous air to some points but overall, its a good fic. Thanks for sharing this, author. It was my respite even for a short bit.

Write your own fanfictions, you bloody haters.

I just finished all the chapters and really enjoyed them the mixing of both genres and done greatly hope you continue it

If you've always planned on keeping Harry and Hermione apart, then it should have been made clear from the start. Having Harry and Hermione end up together in this world implies that they'll be working/living/etc. together. I'm not very fond of it.

It really grinds my gears that Harry and Hermione are being kept apart. What's worse is that Harry and Hermione seem perfectly fine with it. Other than that, still intrigued.

Boring no wonder it stopped.

I'm glad you stopped writing. I

I like that Hermione is determined to get back from her time line. However part of me feels like she should just accept the fact that it might be impossible. Hermione is a genius I give her that but in her denial u wonder if she consider this to be Alternative universe different from her own or parallel worlds? Have she consider that's he was brought her here for a reason and when the time is right then maybe they will go back to her own world?
Another thing I have trouble understanding is why she used magic to make the wolfs freeze she lucky it was only Jon who saw it. Robb luwin and Ned knows too. She lucky they accepted it and Ned is honorable enough to keep his word.
Harry has a good head on his shoulder and I could see where his morals between right and wrong. I wish he come to realizes that it alright to self defend yourself. Even in there world killing was ok if means to defend oneself. But with him seeing his mother die by Voldemort I understand. Another thing with the amigous

But at the same time I get where he coming from seeing his mother die.

I have no idea why people are being so weirdly vicious in the reviews, there are so many great components here and a super fun story! Harry leaning into the world they’re in is a fascinating choice and it’s made more meaningful by the fact that his magic isn’t as available, of course he’s going to react to things differently without it. And splitting the HP kids up has a lot of potential for character growth for both of them, and changes for the plot, especially since if I’m reading right Cersei definitely thinks Harry is a Baratheon bastard.

Anyway even if this never gets finished I’m glad I read it, mostly because it’s got so much potential it can slot nicely in with all the fics I imagine and never get around to writing so I can think about directions it could go lol

What a mess of a story. "You're a wizard, Harry!" is a very cannon description this is not. You could have written two OC instead instead we got this weak half ass characters and barely a storyline.

Eugh. Should've read the signs. Seeing your previous works and skimming through the last 3 chapters, it's pretty clear that this is your little self-insert wank fic as Hermione. You wasted my time you lying bitch. Go touch fucking grass you fucking loser.

Boohoo this Harry can just go fucking die in a ditch.

I can't stand all this contrived drama. Ffs these guys are 16. Why do they act like 10 year olds? Literally injured on a life or death fight and this mf wanted peace. "wHy diD tHeY atTacKed?" Oh ffs stfu.