This was a good story, despite what people said about splitting up, I didn't think it was a disaster, this could have been a great story with good drama. But I don't think you are going to pick it up after 8 years.

Answer is obvious this is during the rescue of Buckbeak meaning the Goblet of Fire can bring them back. Despite being 8 seasons all the events can happen in just a year.

It was a good story.

Chapter 11 and 12 are a absolute mess

delete this cringe

Dude you screwed up the story. It had good potential. Probably the story was dropped because you got lost. Before writing something, always have a general idea of what the beginning, climax and end of a story will be like. I think you got lost when you brought two mages to Westeros and treated them like eunuchs trying to mate. Both of them barely had a decent magical education, so limiting their magic even further and not exploring it by wasting time on small, pointless romance schemes with plenty of flushed-faced scenes is a waste of time. Anyway, my criticism is constructive, I hope that when you rewrite it, it takes some of these considerations. It doesn't matter how you develop a story, but keep it with a coherent goal.

Huh. It's a good thing I skip directly to the last chapter to see if this fic is worth my time or not. Now I know you had Hermione split with Harry I definitely am glad I haven't read and been invested in the story coz that would have ruined it for me. And the sad thing is you abandoned your story after making a decision of splitting them up \_(ツ)_/

Your decision to split Harry and Hermione up is the reason you haven't updated since 2014, and you know it. It was a stupid thing to do, because it gave you writer's block. Or perhaps the whole Citadel thing did.

Such a promising story ruined by stuff like that.

I want more.

Keep it coming please it is good

Enjoyed this, sorry to see it discontinued

Such an interesting take on the story! Wish you had not abandoned it...was truly fantastic and unique

I just stayed up way too late reading this and enjoying it tremendously. I hope life and your muse allow you to continue it someday.

This is interesting. I've never read or watched a game of thrones, but I do have an adequate understanding of the general idea of what happens. Of course, the only thing I can remember off the top of my head is that in the TV show, Daenerys has hair that is spiraled like DNA on one side in a double helix and RNA on the other in a single spiral, but still. I am curious as to what happens next, but could you do a favor and do a bit more author's notes explaining stuff for the unashamedly clueless idiots (GoT-wise) like myself?

Ooh I am absolutely loving this AU! I love that Harry and Hermione came to this world together, so they at least have one other person who truly understands their situation, their magic, etc. I also really like that Hermione is a direwolf, just considering the possible Robb/Hermione romance. I’m not sure if you’ve decided on ships, but I like the idea of those two together. It’s also cute that all the direwolf pups always want to be around Hermione haha. Also, I’m intrigued by the idea of Harry and Hermione now having somewhat separate storylines, and that Robb and Hermione will be together for theirs - unless Ned is able to get to Robb in time lol. Ugh, Catelyn is so annoying. I’m sure those pins Hermione made were either some sort of shield/protection magic or even a Portkey. Which would’ve come in handy during the Red Wedding, assuming you’ll still include that in your fic.

I love Arya’s reaction “I want to be like Hermione and do what I want” - haha, the best role model. Now, I wonder if Harry will stay in Winterfell (maybe with Jon too?) or go to Kings Landing. I’m so curious of Cersei’s and Robert’s reaction to Harry. I know in the show (not sure if it’s book canon) they had a son who died, so I’m curious if they think Harry is him. I’ve read a fanfic where this occurs, so I don’t hate the idea. Can’t wait to read the next chapter!