Reviews for Reborn as a Dragon (On Hiatus)
Nargus chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
All is cool, though I do think Harry is being too...open with his secret at the end. To other dragons, the idea is still reasonable, but with Laurence there as well? And how did Temeraire speak in italic? Dragon language? :O
a reviewer chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Very boring and way too dependent on flashbacks. Plus, you keep mixing your tenses, which makes reading your story a pain that is ultimately not worth the effort. So, in conclusion, get an editor and try again.
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Well...I don't like option 2... at all. If Harry is to become a 'tamed' dragon then let it be because he wants it to happen...NOT because he was captured.
Option 1 looks good, Option 3 is also good.
Just how powerful is Harry?Hades at the moment?
Leticia Moriarty chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
hey interesting story so far and i vote for 1 as thats seems more interesting
Brother Sergeant Aeron chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Oh god. Had potential, but then you kind of went and screwed it up. Cliche's abundant.

You could still fix this, hopefully.
OSR fanatic chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
WhiteWolfShadowPanther chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Reborn as a Dragon
vote;
1) Hades meets Temeraire in his dragon form a year later at sea with his pirate ship and Temeraire recognizes his smell.
ShinobiTwin05 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
#1 I think. :)
Inflamora Notoris chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
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cool chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
love it
keep up the great work
Kage 5243 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
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Red Crow chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
i pick number 1. don't like the thought of him being captured at all.
917brat chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
oh man please keep this up and update again soon it sounds so brilliant.
Tsume Raven chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I like both option 1 and 2, but am more partial to option 1.

Can't wait to see what will become of this story, and what happened in those five years of harry's second live. 3
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