| Reviews for Cocoa |
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   mackiechandler chapter 2 . 11/19/2023 This one breaks my heart. Excellent writing. |
| laura.baumbach1 chapter 2 . 8/18/2021 Christ, that made me cry - and I'm a nurse! Thank you. |
| Dee474 chapter 2 . 8/13/2018 good reading. drama was engaging with a great uplifting end. |
| cdrDobes chapter 2 . 3/9/2018 Great story. You have really captured the characters and the great relationship that Illya and Napoleon have. ; Thank you ! |
| Larsen5 chapter 1 . 1/5/2017 Goodness! You had me worried there for the whole of chapter 2. :) My favorite part was in chapter 1, though: Illya saying he was sorry and Napoleon realizing it was goodbye. The suspense and the feeling of the moment were amazing. |
| lindafishes8 chapter 2 . 1/10/2014 How amazing! A real edge of your seat, hands in front of you face and holding your breath nail biter! Really enjoyed this one. Thanks! |
| Sue chapter 2 . 8/29/2013 Scary story, indeed. I could feel the cold. The cold of the water, the cell...the grave? Thank goodness the end was not what was being led to. Brava! |
| YumYumPM chapter 2 . 8/29/2013 Yay! You had me worried. I'm glad things worked out. |
| YumYumPM chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 Oh no, will Illya survive? Will Napoleon survive if Illya doesn't? |
| Neshomeleh chapter 2 . 7/24/2013 That's a very good story, thanks for sharing |
| LaH Carabele chapter 2 . 6/22/2013 Interesting scenario and very well written. |
| MargaretLattany chapter 2 . 6/20/2013 This was sweet - very well done! You had me hanging on the entire time I read this, I couldn't stop! Hope you'll write more! Loved the bantering threats at the end, shows how connected NS and IK are. You nailed it. |
| MargaretLattany chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 May I say: Chilling! |
| RoseLight chapter 2 . 6/18/2013 Wonderfully realistic. That hypnotic repetition of "holding Illya" beats into our brains, as well as Solo's. Portrait of a partnership under pressure. |
| RoseLight chapter 1 . 6/18/2013 The classic banter becomes begging, as mounting fear for his partner pierces Solo. The last paragraph is insightful. |