Reviews for Cocoa
Dee474 chapter 2 . 8/13/2018
good reading. drama was engaging with a great uplifting end.
cdrDobes chapter 2 . 3/9/2018
Great story. You have really captured the characters and the great relationship that Illya and Napoleon have. ; Thank you !
Larsen5 chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
Goodness! You had me worried there for the whole of chapter 2. :) My favorite part was in chapter 1, though: Illya saying he was sorry and Napoleon realizing it was goodbye. The suspense and the feeling of the moment were amazing.
lindafishes8 chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
How amazing! A real edge of your seat, hands in front of you face and holding your breath nail biter! Really enjoyed this one. Thanks!
Sue chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
Scary story, indeed. I could feel the cold. The cold of the water, the cell...the grave? Thank goodness the end was not what was being led to. Brava!
YumYumPM chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
Yay! You had me worried. I'm glad things worked out.
YumYumPM chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Oh no, will Illya survive? Will Napoleon survive if Illya doesn't?
Neshomeleh chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
That's a very good story, thanks for sharing
LaH Carabele chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Interesting scenario and very well written.
MargaretLattany chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
This was sweet - very well done! You had me hanging on the entire time I read this, I couldn't stop! Hope you'll write more! Loved the bantering threats at the end, shows how connected NS and IK are. You nailed it.
MargaretLattany chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
May I say: Chilling!
RoseLight chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Wonderfully realistic. That hypnotic repetition of "holding Illya" beats into our brains, as well as Solo's.
Portrait of a partnership under pressure.
RoseLight chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
The classic banter becomes begging, as mounting fear for his partner pierces Solo. The last paragraph is insightful.
PACTNMMT chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Very nicely done. I was on the edge of my seat the whole story.
L chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
This is great story telling. I did not want to read that Illya had died but could not stop myself
from finishing the story. Thank you
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