Christ, that made me cry - and I'm a nurse!
Thank you.

good reading. drama was engaging with a great uplifting end.

Great story. You have really captured the characters and the great relationship that Illya and Napoleon have. ; Thank you !

Goodness! You had me worried there for the whole of chapter 2. :) My favorite part was in chapter 1, though: Illya saying he was sorry and Napoleon realizing it was goodbye. The suspense and the feeling of the moment were amazing.

How amazing! A real edge of your seat, hands in front of you face and holding your breath nail biter! Really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

Scary story, indeed. I could feel the cold. The cold of the water, the cell...the grave? Thank goodness the end was not what was being led to. Brava!

Yay! You had me worried. I'm glad things worked out.

Oh no, will Illya survive? Will Napoleon survive if Illya doesn't?

That's a very good story, thanks for sharing

Interesting scenario and very well written.

This was sweet - very well done! You had me hanging on the entire time I read this, I couldn't stop! Hope you'll write more! Loved the bantering threats at the end, shows how connected NS and IK are. You nailed it.

May I say: Chilling!

Wonderfully realistic. That hypnotic repetition of "holding Illya" beats into our brains, as well as Solo's.
Portrait of a partnership under pressure.

The classic banter becomes begging, as mounting fear for his partner pierces Solo. The last paragraph is insightful.

Very nicely done. I was on the edge of my seat the whole story.