Reviews for A Working Title: Part Three |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have behaved myself through this story thus far because I really love it. There are many misused words throughout, however, this one really drives me crazy: "Gitty" A narrow, pedestrian, passageway in a residential area, between high brick walls, wooden fences, hedges, etc. noun. Sorry, I just couldn't take it anymore even though I realize that this story was completed a long time ago. Giddy having a sensation of whirling and a tendency to fall or stagger; dizzy. "Luke felt almost giddy with relief" Make (someone) feel excited to the point of disorientation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. I wanted to smack many of the characters many times. But it all worked out in the end. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() These 2 can't seem to do anything with making a big scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She just had to do it. And she wonders why Edward fussed over her safety. But it seems to have all worked out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward made me cry. But they really needed that talk. I'm glad she is listening to Embry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So it all ties back to James by the sounds of it. The one that got away so to speak. Wow. 3 babies. So pleased she has decided to not run. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, it was traumatic, but she's off again. Don't think Edward will let her go that easily. I'm guessing it's Laurant, the driver from the wedding. Loved Embry in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He so does. Why goes she plan on doing stupid stuff. When will she learn. She can be really frustrating at times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. But sometimes these things need to happen for them to be able to get stronger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man and so it begins. That man really does go over the top sometimes. Women of celebrity status have been having kids for years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, she sure knows how to make an impression. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds scary. And is she already pregnant? She is so up and down, but putting it down to Edward being away. Seems they've managed to get a way around getting Bella to do the movie. Should be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad they both came through for Bella. Jacob is still on the shit list though. Even though he helped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go bella. They both needed to hear that. Edward needs to stop being over dramatic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear. Jacob is a right baby right now. Don't get his own way and had a tantrum. Gone off him again. He was growing on me. Everyone needs to back off. Stop pushing Bella. |