Heartbreaking.

Omg! I have stayed up 2 nights in a row reading this series! I love your other stories so ,UCD. Going to start Crossfade now even if it’s on hiatus.

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married & I’m happy that Bella & Edward have Five Beautiful kids

yes Martin Sheen makes a wonderful president

To see their faces, ugh.

Duh duh duh!?

Finally! I'm proud of our girl.

Reading this story many years after you posted it and am completely entranced by it. I read The twilight saga many years after it was released also as I thought it was tweenie story and I was already a mum to tweenies of my own. Finally read it while babysitting my grandchildren. I have no critique to make but as a spelling nazi I would love to attack it with a red pen lol (no not a teacher, I was a nurse) I hope you went on to make a successful and profitable career with your writing as you deserve it. I have a few more of your stories to read on here and I am looking forward to that. Best of Luck in the future Pam

OMG! I’m close throat I had that feeling when my grandpa died gosh. You put it so true wow really I’m wordless

Perfect story

But WHY are they together? They fight all the time and Edward seems to have taken it to be his life mission to change Bella's personality as much as he possibly can by constantly admonishing or correcting her, and Bella is definitely not in the same page as him when it comes to aspirations in the near future. So, Why? I just don't see the great love that would provide an answer to this question.

So what did Bella's parents do with the money they borrowed from the bank? I think l missed that part.

How could you mark this complete. It is horrible when an author looses interest, has a dry spell, or family problems, but you marked it complete mid thought. You didn’t leave it open ended and left for interpretation. You didn’t leave a hea, but you imagine a life with kids, you left it mid thought and called it complete. Maybe I should have read the reviews, but I have never run into a marked complete fic that really wasn’t. For the future when you mark your fic complete you don’t leave it mid thought. Leave them married and without kids, or together and left to imangination if they get married, but this is far from complete. If you don’t know the difference I hope you do before you keep on doing this to people. And I would tell you this under my account, but I lost me passcode long ago. Dawn

Ummm what’s with the last sentence in this chapter? You’re eventually going to kill off Jacob? Thank god I’m reading this as a complete story. A cliffie like that could cause an anxiety attack.

Thanks you for writing!