Reviews for A Working Title: Part Three |
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lemonbutt chapter 17 . 9/27/2014 How nice of them! |
lemonbutt chapter 16 . 9/27/2014 I loved her in her interview! |
lemonbutt chapter 11 . 9/26/2014 Edward is too nice. I would've called the whole thing off. After seeing that was just throwing out dates for the wedding. |
lemonbutt chapter 4 . 9/26/2014 Lmfao! The ending of this cracked me up. |
lemonbutt chapter 3 . 9/26/2014 This should be fun. |
lemonbutt chapter 2 . 9/26/2014 How does Embry feel when the girls call Bella Mom? |
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 I'm going to sound like a dick for this. He had a breaking point. There were many times she fucked up. What he did was shady. They need to get their shit together. |
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 53 . 9/18/2014 So... I totally agree with you in that while I abhor the idea of any romantic involvement between Bella and Jacob, I do enjoy him immensely when ever he is an honest to goodness, Tuesday friend. And I really don't mind him at all I need this story. I also like how he and Embry are gunning for the godfather position, lol. And yes, Bella's short comings can be annoying at times but I am so far from hating her, at all. She's young... and while I'm not using that as her absolute excuse, I think all readers have to remember that Bella was a longer most of her life and that was never by choice. She's still trying to figure things out. Hell as a 42 year old woman at a crossroads in her career and her marriage, I've had to try to go figure myself out again! So folks need to cut her some slack and at least not have her. There... said my peace. :) |
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 5 . 9/16/2014 I can see why this was a fun chapter to write! And ummm...is there really a secret society such as this or did you literally make it all up? Because the "hadbook", if you will, seemed to cover all bases, lol. I applaud and admire you for keeping the plot lines and back stories so clear! :) |
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 4 . 9/16/2014 Ooooohhhh... Kick Ass Bella is in da hooooouuussseee! Lmfao... I'm so giddy to click on the next chapter! |
Rebadams7 chapter 61 . 5/18/2014 Whoa. She just won't ever get it Maybe crossfade will enlighten the reader Awesome with where I live and breathe R |
Gidget922 chapter 20 . 5/13/2014 I love how you are telling their life story and their friends n family as well stories |
Gidget922 chapter 14 . 5/13/2014 Another grand chapter |
Gidget922 chapter 5 . 5/12/2014 Xcellent I love how you created this chapter I love how your Bella has evolved |