Wow xcellent this reminds me of something I researched when I lived in WV

I am really enjoying reading this story. It is such an interesting concept and the inner workings of Bella's mind are fascinating. I recognise a lot of my own thoughts and feelings with her - especially the concern that with happiness comes tragedy. It always seems the way.
The ONLY thing that I find distracting is the repeated confusion between their, there and they're. Errors like these are very distracting and take the reader out of the narrative and remind them that it is fanfiction. I know that, personally, I have a few spelling and grammatical habits that are incorrect. Being aware of them helps me to avoid the mistakes. I hope you are not offended by my pointing this out.
Truly, your writing is engaging and heart wrenching. This is just a small criticism.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us all.

When Bella calls Jake from D.C. it's 2am Eastern yet Jake says it's 5am on the west coast which is impossible. Eastern time is 3 hours ahead of Pacific not behind, therefore it would be 11pm in LA when Jake answered. Great story! It's amazing how you can picture so many celebrities as the characters you've written.

Congratulations on your nomination and for completing this brilliant story! I just voted for you and I really hope you win, you truly deserve it! Once again congrats and thank you for your time and devotion for beginning and COMPLETING this awesome story!

A Working Title: Part Three has been nominated in the poll to find the Top Ten Favourite Fics completed in April on www . twifanfictionrecs . com

OMG WTF HAPPENED!?

That was a wonderful ride. Thank you for sharing.

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An amazing ending though it was a teaser! I guess it's for the mind to wonder! Thanks for the story. I'm excited to begin Crossfade! I love Mistakes From My Past, and look forward to your future stories! Thanks for the amazing read. And, as always, happy writing!:)

It is a wonderful saga. I have enjoyed it all. Your grammar and spelling were awesome. I can't thank you enough for writing it.

The first four sentences of the first paragraph in part I:

'I had been asked to write my memoir many times before. A great deal of people have offered me a great deal of money in the past for it; not that I blame them I have lived a fairly interesting life. I love my husband and it wasn't till after he passed that I could begin to think about spilling the dirty details of our life together. Many may think it is an insult to his memory, but even though I plan on giving you a very personal insight, I still believe that this will not have been an insult but a tribute of the love we shared for over fifty years.'

So, from that, and things she said throughout, it sounded to me like this whole thing in its three parts was Bella writing her memoirs in her 70's or so. Together for over 50 years sounds like Edward was around 90 when he died.

It seems strange to me that someone writing her memoirs would end it the way this last chapter ended - unless she died before it was finished. Like another reviewer said - I'm confused - even though I know this continues in Crossfade with EPOV. It's a little frustrating to have some questions go unanswered and some things never explained and not know if they ever will be.

I bailed on this story for a long time because I couldn't take Bella's weakness in submitting to that "domestic discipline" nonsense. I hate characters that allow themselves to be hit or controlled. I suppose I finally came back to this because I couldn't resist seeing if she ever put a final stop to Edward's controlling behavior because she'd done it once.

Hoping all the questions Working Title left are answered in Crossfade.

I love the story - the series but I think this is not the end. who is haunt her. The funeral of other rapper and many others. Will you continue with these things?

loved this story. So sad it is finished

omg I. was hoping to not see this completed already, i wanted to crye. Anyway i hope we get to read on what happened to her on crossfade

Great job!