I have to admit...I'm waiting for Crossfade. Mainly because it's EPOV. I get tired of only BPOV stories with a few exceptions. This story is one of those exceptions. I do hope that you plan to continue your next story in Edward's POV. But whether you do or not, I'll still read it!

That was a great chapter. I see where Bella is coming from. Thanks for writing.

uh oh, the drama is coming next ch, isn't it?

Enjoyable chapter. Great pace. Bella will be Bella. Edward has patience and love Jacob.

I can't find myself liking this Bella, AT ALL. She never seems happy or content. She treats Embry & Jacob better than her own husband. She's selfish. I can't understand how people tolerate her.

loved this

Wow great chap. This gets better and better every time dear! I'm so excited that I want to read all chaps at once! Lol!
And those hints about what is about to come, omg they are driving me crazy!
Good job hon! Can't wait for next chapter...

Good chapter

I dont like the wsy jacob is always pushing himself on her.

I read it in 10 minutes. please let the next chapter be at least 20 minutes otherwise longer.
the chapter is great I can not wait to read how crazy is September.

She seems to be more affectionate with Jacob then Edward, and why is she being selfish...she said she is scared she might lose the baby, but she wont take a break from work which could be very since she became a celebrity she has bee atrisious towards the ones she supposedly loves...and isn't Embry girls Charlies grandkids..

That was a great reveal! Can you imagone being that kid, telling your friends? Lol

A "diva mother who felt the need to draw out her labor."

I'm gonna assume you've never been in labor, because (1) you cannot choose to draw out your labor, and (2) diva or not, i doubt anyone would opt to draw out their labor if it were possible. They can act the diva during labor, I'm sure.

Just curious, any idea how many chapters to this story?

Oohhh a baby! Great chapter. Thanks for writing.