| Reviews for A Working Title: Part Three |
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   Nannyjojo chapter 3 . 11/9/2020 Go Bella. It's about time they didn't get their own way all the time. She really had come into her own |
| Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 11/9/2020 I did wonder if they are in the books she was talking to bella about. Edward would deserve everything he got in my opinion. But he still make me cry on this chapter. This definitely has made bella stronger. And I think in the long run it will make Edward and Bella stronger. |
| Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 11/9/2020 I'm glad she is finally standing up for herself. Can't say I blame her for what she said. I can always forgive Edward anything, but right now I'm not ready to forgive him either, but seeing him hurting breaks me. Every time. Even now when he deserves it. |
| Iersseltje chapter 26 . 2/23/2020 Heartbreaking. |
| JayNahNah chapter 61 . 1/21/2020 Omg! I have stayed up 2 nights in a row reading this series! I love your other stories so ,UCD. Going to start Crossfade now even if it’s on hiatus. |
| ClaceLover08 chapter 60 . 8/9/2019 i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married & I’m happy that Bella & Edward have Five Beautiful kids |
| Fashionista-girl chapter 6 . 7/19/2019 yes Martin Sheen makes a wonderful president |
| DebraDoo42 chapter 4 . 6/18/2019 To see their faces, ugh. |
| DebraDoo42 chapter 3 . 6/18/2019 Duh duh duh!? |
| KarmaEcho chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 Finally! I'm proud of our girl. |
| Pam Manser Smith chapter 46 . 4/14/2019 Reading this story many years after you posted it and am completely entranced by it. I read The twilight saga many years after it was released also as I thought it was tweenie story and I was already a mum to tweenies of my own. Finally read it while babysitting my grandchildren. I have no critique to make but as a spelling nazi I would love to attack it with a red pen lol (no not a teacher, I was a nurse) I hope you went on to make a successful and profitable career with your writing as you deserve it. I have a few more of your stories to read on here and I am looking forward to that. Best of Luck in the future Pam |
| ludwikacullen chapter 25 . 3/23/2019 OMG! I’m close throat I had that feeling when my grandpa died gosh. You put it so true wow really I’m wordless |
| bellev chapter 60 . 3/21/2019 Perfect story |
| Allear chapter 34 . 2/7/2019 But WHY are they together? They fight all the time and Edward seems to have taken it to be his life mission to change Bella's personality as much as he possibly can by constantly admonishing or correcting her, and Bella is definitely not in the same page as him when it comes to aspirations in the near future. So, Why? I just don't see the great love that would provide an answer to this question. |
| Allear chapter 19 . 2/7/2019 So what did Bella's parents do with the money they borrowed from the bank? I think l missed that part. |