Reviews for The Scar
Diamante8 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
This is such a great Fan Fic. It is so sad and makes so much sense. Thanks for writing this story. This story highlights the importance of family very much.
OnlyNeeded151 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Wow! That was...dark, I suppose. Darker than most Ash-is-champion fanfictions. I love the way you wrote that, it made me see Ash's father in a different light.. Wow.
CAPJHMPAgirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Whoa. This was really good. It is a bit dark, but if a father leaves his family it would leave an emotional scar. Poor Ash, feeling so alone that he had to cut himself. Can't believe someone would try to cheat their way to victory. A nice take on the mystery of Ash's father. :) I can't wait for the next round of Pokemon Adventures!