the idea that the force is a being that would even care about the lost lives is just wrong. i mean its been shown time and again that the force is both light and dark, in lore and in out. it gave him a job and he did it. in the eyes of a all consuming being that would be so far above sentient beings, that we would look like bacteria to it, he did his job without issue. i get the start you are going for, but starting your entire story, with vader massively OOC, and the force OOC, its not a good start. it does not point to a good story.

Great story . I am sad it ended so abruptly . Would you mind doing a short summary on how you intended to end it

He was alone with Palpatine and the count he should have just killed them then?
He had the count in a force choke and could t have killed him in a second so it would be a 1v1 and then kill Palpatine then and there?

Anakin is quite oc because the vader I know didn't scream in terror. and you described the force like the bible talks about god. Some absoloute controlling will that judges people after they are dead and deals out punishments based on their deeds? where the hell did you get that?the force isnt a god, nor it is a power for good nor does it has way tho define what is good and bad. it just is

It never specified. Is he just in his suit in a healed body or with his old damaged body? when he died it said he had his healed body back and the black shit only made the suit around him it didn't give him his injuries again

Hmm not really a Vader redemption fic if he’s obliterated a city

J'aime beaucoup cette histoire bien écrite et je vais lire l'autre.

J'adore depuis quelque jours jai un reguin du teret pour les fics et l'univers stars wars.

This is bad very bad. This isn't Vader in any way besides shape. How did you write this and think to yourself that this was right.

Now that Palpatine is can no longer play the 'my apprentice might surpass me. Better make a horrible suit' card, can vader technically build his suit piece by piece? Make a truly frighteningly powerful version?

You literally made up a Vader quote and proceeded to make a claim about the force that is not only false but grossly incorrect.

Hope is going to be new chapters and hope you put Dark Troopers as Darth Vader's troops and with help his soldiers and please continues this story please!?

How can Vader expect to save Anakin, if everything he does is following Palpatines orders and winning the war for the separatists. The story is a really nice idea, but otherwise...

This was an absolutely brilliant read. , thank you :) look forward to chapter 2

Starkiller huh... Kento would make a good apprentice