Reviews for A Second Chance
kirosyamcha chapter 5 . 8/1
Hmm not really a Vader redemption fic if he’s obliterated a city
gabelou1991 chapter 13 . 6/2
J'aime beaucoup cette histoire bien écrite et je vais lire l'autre.
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 5/30
J'adore depuis quelque jours jai un reguin du teret pour les fics et l'univers stars wars.
MrKeyFox chapter 2 . 2/20
This is bad very bad. This isn't Vader in any way besides shape. How did you write this and think to yourself that this was right.
randomuser855 chapter 1 . 9/29/2021
Now that Palpatine is can no longer play the 'my apprentice might surpass me. Better make a horrible suit' card, can vader technically build his suit piece by piece? Make a truly frighteningly powerful version?
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 8/25/2021
You literally made up a Vader quote and proceeded to make a claim about the force that is not only false but grossly incorrect.
AnimeGoji91 chapter 13 . 7/12/2021
Hope is going to be new chapters and hope you put Dark Troopers as Darth Vader's troops and with help his soldiers and please continues this story please!?
vivinene chapter 13 . 5/27/2021
How can Vader expect to save Anakin, if everything he does is following Palpatines orders and winning the war for the separatists. The story is a really nice idea, but otherwise...
joe haynes chapter 1 . 12/20/2020
This was an absolutely brilliant read. , thank you :) look forward to chapter 2
Kuro.435 chapter 3 . 11/13/2020
Starkiller huh... Kento would make a good apprentice
Kuro.435 chapter 2 . 11/13/2020
Outstanding chapter, truly marvelous how it portrayed the Jedi and the Separatists (before Sidious corrupted their goals). This shows that Vader’s fall back then wasn’t as baseless and entirely his fault since the Jedi Order had log since been corrupted
Kuro.435 chapter 1 . 11/13/2020
Awesome beginning, a punishment with hidden motives of redemption and to defy destiny itself
JadeUnderwater chapter 12 . 10/29/2020
Even u had already rewrite the story I still want to say this is probably the best military sifi plus action story I have ever read in Star war s fanfics. Very nicely down, especially the entire on the indomitable.
Guestinator chapter 1 . 9/26/2020
Damn, lost me with that random Force Beyond God Actual Being That Communicates With Someone Randomly After Tens Of Thousands Of Years.

As you might be able to tell that did not engage me. Godspeed on the story!
E chapter 2 . 8/6/2020
Vader definitely deluded himself. Did you see RotS? He had lost himself to this inane concept that somehow he was doing good by killing all Jedi and destroying democracy. Some of that was powerhigh, sure, but a lot of that never went away. He truely believed in the Empire. In the barest, most naive sense the Empire had some just foundations. There was meritocracy ideas at its core, only those who work hard will get ahead. And on the Core Worlds, localized crime went to an all time low. That was it. Overall, organized crime skyrocketed, genocides and slavery and other humanitarian crises happened regularly and were even institutionalized, and corruption was actively encouraged by Palpatine. This was the Empire that Vader had convinced himself was the only option. There were plenty of Rebels that liked the Empire as an idea, but not its execution, he could have easily joined and fit in. But no, he deluded himself fir half his life because he had convinced himself he had no alternatives. That he had to cope with the status quo and was too scared of losing the little he had left in life, himself (barely) and a master who had made as much a slave out of him as everyone else he ever served. So he definitely deluded himself just as much as any Jedi, just in different ways. He had little self righteousness, but plenty of self-fufilling cycles that he himself perpetuated. So I disagree overall with your take on the Jedi. Really what I got from the prequels and originals overall was that the Jedi had noble goals, but had become mired by arrogance and shortsightedness, and that they were as much responsible for Anakin's choices as Palpatine and Anakin himself were. As far as I know though, Voss was a maverick but not particularly self righteous. That's more a Windu thing. Voss isn't the kind of guy to do something like what's described here, maybe Mundi would.
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