This is still the best space battle I’ve ever read

There is no need to get into sidious‘s inner circle. He could’ve created his own faction to oppose both sides. Or just cause chaos by outing palpatine. You ruined your own story with one single chapter. I’ve never seen an author do this so blatantly and be so proud of his decision. I am in awe of your stupidity

This is so fucking stupid. He’s here to change his destiny, not fucking bend the knee to sidious again. He should’ve listened to the force not fucking sidious. God this is such a shit story. No wonder you abandoned it. You wrote yourself into a fucking corner.

You also say he’s in the suit, but does he have all his limbs? Is he still in immense pain? You don’t explain this stuff.

Defy destiny but get punished for failing to fulfill your destiny. What a idiotic fucking plot. When he died, he fulfilled his destiny. He didn’t fail it, but you’re saying he failed it, so he now must go back in time and make sure his past self fails to fail his destiny. You get how stupid this fucking sounds?

So the force is punishing vader for not fulfilling his destiny. But then tells him to defy destiny. Seems legit

Im surprised you didnt have vader tell padme to comm and order an evac of theed secretly so that vader gave em like 5 min so padme aint totally pissed at vader and saves vaders conscious.

the idea that the force is a being that would even care about the lost lives is just wrong. i mean its been shown time and again that the force is both light and dark, in lore and in out. it gave him a job and he did it. in the eyes of a all consuming being that would be so far above sentient beings, that we would look like bacteria to it, he did his job without issue. i get the start you are going for, but starting your entire story, with vader massively OOC, and the force OOC, its not a good start. it does not point to a good story.

Great story . I am sad it ended so abruptly . Would you mind doing a short summary on how you intended to end it

He was alone with Palpatine and the count he should have just killed them then?
He had the count in a force choke and could t have killed him in a second so it would be a 1v1 and then kill Palpatine then and there?

Anakin is quite oc because the vader I know didn't scream in terror. and you described the force like the bible talks about god. Some absoloute controlling will that judges people after they are dead and deals out punishments based on their deeds? where the hell did you get that?the force isnt a god, nor it is a power for good nor does it has way tho define what is good and bad. it just is

It never specified. Is he just in his suit in a healed body or with his old damaged body? when he died it said he had his healed body back and the black shit only made the suit around him it didn't give him his injuries again

Hmm not really a Vader redemption fic if he’s obliterated a city

J'aime beaucoup cette histoire bien écrite et je vais lire l'autre.

J'adore depuis quelque jours jai un reguin du teret pour les fics et l'univers stars wars.