Reviews for A Second Chance
daemon452 chapter 1 . 11/6
the idea that the force is a being that would even care about the lost lives is just wrong. i mean its been shown time and again that the force is both light and dark, in lore and in out. it gave him a job and he did it. in the eyes of a all consuming being that would be so far above sentient beings, that we would look like bacteria to it, he did his job without issue. i get the start you are going for, but starting your entire story, with vader massively OOC, and the force OOC, its not a good start. it does not point to a good story.
Arekanderu chapter 13 . 8/12
Great story . I am sad it ended so abruptly . Would you mind doing a short summary on how you intended to end it
Arumia chapter 5 . 5/29
He was alone with Palpatine and the count he should have just killed them then?
He had the count in a force choke and could t have killed him in a second so it would be a 1v1 and then kill Palpatine then and there?
asdasd chapter 1 . 5/19
Anakin is quite oc because the vader I know didn't scream in terror. and you described the force like the bible talks about god. Some absoloute controlling will that judges people after they are dead and deals out punishments based on their deeds? where the hell did you get that?the force isnt a god, nor it is a power for good nor does it has way tho define what is good and bad. it just is
Aedwards179 chapter 2 . 5/7
It never specified. Is he just in his suit in a healed body or with his old damaged body? when he died it said he had his healed body back and the black shit only made the suit around him it didn't give him his injuries again
kirosyamcha chapter 5 . 8/1/2022
Hmm not really a Vader redemption fic if he’s obliterated a city
gabelou1991 chapter 13 . 6/2/2022
J'aime beaucoup cette histoire bien écrite et je vais lire l'autre.
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 5/30/2022
J'adore depuis quelque jours jai un reguin du teret pour les fics et l'univers stars wars.
MrKeyFox chapter 2 . 2/20/2022
This is bad very bad. This isn't Vader in any way besides shape. How did you write this and think to yourself that this was right.
randomuser855 chapter 1 . 9/29/2021
Now that Palpatine is can no longer play the 'my apprentice might surpass me. Better make a horrible suit' card, can vader technically build his suit piece by piece? Make a truly frighteningly powerful version?
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 8/25/2021
You literally made up a Vader quote and proceeded to make a claim about the force that is not only false but grossly incorrect.
AnimeGoji91 chapter 13 . 7/12/2021
Hope is going to be new chapters and hope you put Dark Troopers as Darth Vader's troops and with help his soldiers and please continues this story please!?
vivinene chapter 13 . 5/27/2021
How can Vader expect to save Anakin, if everything he does is following Palpatines orders and winning the war for the separatists. The story is a really nice idea, but otherwise...
joe haynes chapter 1 . 12/20/2020
This was an absolutely brilliant read. , thank you :) look forward to chapter 2
Kuro.435 chapter 3 . 11/13/2020
Starkiller huh... Kento would make a good apprentice
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