Reviews for Doomed
CarrieB chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Read the first part and want to keep going!
Kerato chapter 11 . 11/19/2013
such a beautiful story. I nearly cried at the end:') I wish it was canon.
TMI Fairy chapter 12 . 11/16/2013
An interesting story, a thumbs up for originality, but some effort into spelling would be appreciated.
Borys
vorc.kel chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
yes, they are created evil. If they dont hate they dont are born, they are more tortured until they only hate.
dont exist a child orc, they are created adults.
SelimPensFiction chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
Quite enjoying this. Really interesting to see the story from the point of view of Orcs, and conflicted Orcs at that!
TMI Fairy chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
"My slapper" - my brain is trying to go to quite interesting places now ...
Borys
TMI Fairy chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
[She rushes at me successfully landing a front kick to my face, "AARKGGah," I shout as I fall backwards.]
This must be "nice to make your acquaintance, m'lord" in post-revolutionary Urukspeak.
Borys
leala chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
it's great! please keep writing!
moonfeather58 chapter 6 . 8/8/2013
Interesting. Well this meeting between the Orks should be something to look forward to in the coming chapter.
moonfeather58 chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Poor Vruuk.
TMI Fairy chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Have Legolas' keen elven eyes spied Vruurk crouching to pee behind a bush that she knows she's a girl?
:D

Borys
seafarer chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
Hmmm... What will Gandalf think of this turn of events? :)
moonfeather58 chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
Thank you for updating! Been a while. Ah so Vruuk is a she-Orc. Hopefully Legalos and Gimli in time manage to trust and accept Vruuk.
SparklesAreMyLife chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
Hmm.. This is very interesting. I am looking forward for more!
TMI Fairy chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
I'm following attentively. List of unasked advice in the mail.
Borys
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