Reviews for Adopted by Default |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see the strawhats pull up... |
![]() ![]() Your writing is so good! And this story is top notch. |
![]() ![]() hi! i was rereading this entire fic and it really did have me in stitches the way it often does sfakcbakfbjsbfa this fic is one of the best one piece fics out here and thank you so much for writing it! i dunno if u still check this account, but whereve hope ur doing well. thank you for writing this fic bc its been with me since my teenage years 333 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, this doesn't even need to be marked for hiatus; the ending was slightly abrupt, but the whole story was satisfying overall. The only thing I can think of that was left out was whatever was up with Teach, but let's be real here - no one cares about him. I had so much fun reading it! |
![]() ![]() I just found this Gem! I hope you and you're family are well. Shame about the hiatus, I'll save this one on my favorites stories, hoping you'll update. If not, don't worry I don't mind re-reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story! I hope everyone in your family is doing better |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved the different conversation and interactions that Luffy and the rest Whitebeard pirates have going on. Especially the ones that were forgotten or seemed as extras after the Marineford Arc. Hope to read the rest of the upcoming chapters!️ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ah such a brilliant story no matter what it always brought a smile to face and I just loved the antics it's like you actually captured the Luffy seen in the anime, keep up work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() omg at least it ended where all crew members met him huuhuuu. I guess I'll just comment what I feel like needs to be addressed in the future if you still plan on picking it up 1) shanks ykno just for fun 2) garp for fun as well 3) teach fight honestly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this is seriously such a wonderful story! Gosh what a wonderful way to avoid Marineford! Getting all this fluff is a blessing! I LOVE how all the StrawHats threaten the WhiteBeards at one point, also I love that you highlight the difference in their dynamic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really nice story, sad to see it end but at least you managed to get an appearance from all the straw hats before you had to stop. |
![]() ![]() please update its been six years |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! I can't even breathe this is so funny |