Reviews for The Stolen Bride
lady.kira8 chapter 12 . 10/20
I wish you continue this story... I wanna see Inori's reaction when she knows that Kurama kidnapped her.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/13
It's still weird for a 14 / 15 yeard old boybfeel sexual attraction towards a 10 year old girl.
After years of reading Inuyasha fanfictions and discussing aspects of mates in youkai terms, it's safe to say that normally Kurama would feel unconditional love and a strong sense of protection. Since, in spite of being human, he's also demon oriented, he only should feel sexual attraction towards his mate when her body was mature enough. You don't see pedophilia in the animal world, this is a human fault.
You should fix those details. You seem too confused, sometimes you treat the witch like a teen, only for later you remind us she's still a child. It's weird and creepy as fuck. You should have made her only 2 or 3 years younger than him.
By the way, never saw a 10 / 9 year old having her period... could happen, I guess.
Just fix the misspellings, and improve the dialogs.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/13
Incredibly incredible?
The idea is good, but the grammar needs improvement and the dialogs are plain awful. Sorry.
amerdism chapter 12 . 10/5
Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 12 . 8/24
I don't mind her being Kurama's mate but I REALLY want to see how he deals with James, Sirius, and Remus when they find her. No daddy will approve of the man who KIDNAPPED his daughter and LIED to her for years without him giving some real good reasons to accept the mating.
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xenocanaan chapter 12 . 7/9
I can't wait to see what comes next!
DragonFire Princess chapter 12 . 6/1
Guest chapter 12 . 5/7
Update soon please!
dragonlily22 chapter 12 . 5/7
Please update soon!
Ranmaleopard chapter 12 . 2/16
This is great keep it up!
Sakiq-Sakik chapter 12 . 12/20/2014
i love it! makes me laugh so much since i can imagine it happening! i love Inori! wonder what her [parents are doing? are you thinking of doing one small part about them? would be kinda awesome if Remus was considered a demon. if not, oh well. more please! i love it!
jay123 chapter 12 . 8/26/2014
awesome fic can't wait to see more great work
Pixiecropse chapter 12 . 8/18/2014
lol love it
Penna chapter 12 . 8/16/2014
I'm a bit disappointed there's no revelation and confession scene, but their shenanigans more than made up for it, somehow. They're just that cute!
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