Nice take on Irum, I like how their society is very spartan based, quite obvious really, especially the montra. I just don't get the last sentence "Or are they fighting for the same mistress?" What does that mean? The Irum don't serve the man of shadows right?

Well written and very nice. Thanks for reviewing Reign of Shadows, It's a collaborative work between Sigil and myself. We'll be telling different stories but in the same world. On a side note, you posted a chapter twice :)