Reviews for Mental Images
dolphinrain chapter 10 . 11/7/2012
Good story. I loved the 'Alice' episode n this was a nice add on. I can't blame Alice for wanting him so bad. I wouldn't mind 'borrowing' him for a few hours sometime. Oh, well. Anyway, good story.
Fullmetal Demon Alchemist chapter 10 . 11/8/2007
awsome story
Natters chapter 10 . 10/21/2002
very good
Good-bye chapter 10 . 10/5/2002
Great Fic! Makes me wish I had seen the Alice episode...I only saw bits of it actually. *slaps self* Keep writing, It was a blast to read this fic!
Anne McSommers chapter 10 . 10/2/2002
now that was the ending i was hopin for. i liked the story, it was very good
Bek chapter 9 . 10/1/2002
Thankyou for all your hard work. The story was gripping! I will definitely look out for the epilogue
Toria Wildman chapter 8 . 9/30/2002
TOM. CAN. NOT. DIE! Please I beg you, don't let him die, let him live.
Ryn chapter 8 . 9/30/2002
jamie chapter 8 . 9/29/2002
awesome! keep going!
HAA chapter 7 . 9/29/2002
this is good! keep it up.

don't let tom die!
voy234 chapter 7 . 9/27/2002
this is gooood! Continue! please!
Anne McSommers chapter 7 . 9/27/2002
good, good. he has to wake up while she is gone though. maybe wake up and slip away well the doc is no looking. return years later or something like that
Nicki chapter 6 . 9/26/2002
I believe "WOW" and "will there be more soon" qualify lol
Bek chapter 6 . 9/25/2002
Great! Just keep writing! You may want to watch your spelling though. "Stop pretending your Harry, Alice" should really be you're.
Tenko chapter 6 . 9/25/2002's not nearly over yet it is? :D
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