|Reviews for In Bad Faith|
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/19
You should totally come back to this story and update. I love how the plot’s progressing so far. Please consider resuming work on this.
| Intemperance24 chapter 6 . 3/30
could have been a great story.. like ethe premise of the story with a selfinsert, even if i think you take her intelligence to far..
The story moves to slow.. i imagine it is one of the reasons the author did not finish it.. at this pace.. we are 50.000-75.000 words away from desdemona even entering Hogwarts for her first year.. wished the story would develop faster
| Pompomlover71 chapter 1 . 3/29
Hi, I love this story I've read it at least 5 times. I understand that this story is dead, but I just wanted to ask if you've thought about putting this story up for adoption. Hopefully another author would be able to continue your amazing work. Loads of people dislike SI fics, but when done well like this there my favourite stories on here.
much love x
| Ballerina-Geek chapter 1 . 3/17
This is just wow...
I loved this so freaking much. I need like a epic novel of this girl gping through Hogwarts and interacting with our favorite characters! I need it!
Of course i was worried about fanfictions love of mary sue troupe but i dont think thats the case here. Dezzy is thoroughly interesting with a pure sense of slytherin mixed in there. From the getgo i was totally and intensely enthralled with youre writing voice! And what an interesting idea to havw the main character have memories from adulthood growing up. It couldve been boring and patronizing, especially with her still such a young age, or make her into some sort of clever god! Which the narrative addresses beautiful!
Seriously, this is a perfect first chapter to introduce us to the main character and feel out the world in which she lives, and at the same time forshadowing future challenges and plot lines that she's have to overcome in the future. Without it being an unconvincing mess!
I am absolutely enjoying what im reading. Thank you for sharing your creativity with the world
| to guest review chapter 6 . 3/11
Fuck you dude. Don't anger the fucking author. He might just delete his stories. I'm currently hurrying up in saving this coz I really love it. It's my favorite self insert fic. Dezzy is a work of art. So fuck you if the author delete it. I'm holding you responsible for it
| Dead Piece of Sh chapter 6 . 3/10
Okay, many of you have asked me about In Bad Faith. Many, many of you. Reviews, PMs, etc...fine. I can tolerate that. When I post material for a different story, though, one that I've liked and wished I could managed to write more on for *years* and literally the first two reviews I get are requests for more In Bad Faith?
sIn Bad Faith/suiDead Piece of Shit/i/u is dead. Stop bothering me about it. If I ever feel like writing more on it, I will, it's that simple, but as of now, I'm listing it as [DEAD]."
lol author tantrum. you care far far far far too much about reviews. i can understand the ones who go "nobody ever reviews stories here, i'm moving to a forum where people aren't discouraged from talking by site design so i can see readers being active". but this? this isn't even the idiocy of "oh noes constructive criticism (which i asked for!) has killed my spirit! delete delete delete. hugbox only or i take my ball home" it's not even "quit liking things i don't like asdfkhfalkjdfhakjb!11one" it's sillier than that. this is being angry about something you did being popular and people telling you they hope you do more. "quit liking things i made when i want you to tell me how much you liked this other thing i made, or i pop the ball out of spite and run away"
just how ridiculous can get?
(especially getting this worked up over two reviews. just two. i shudder to think what you might do in response to this one, delete all your story archives? rename your account to "fuck this shit in particular"?)
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/3
Please come back... Its a cliffhanger and i want satisfaction. Moar
| ColorfulRandomness chapter 6 . 2/17
My heart is broken. I knew what I was getting in to, but I went for it anyways. Well, nonetheless, thanks for the treat! Dezzy was fun to read about.
| Shin'tet chapter 1 . 2/10
This, this fantastic.
| emily4498 chapter 6 . 1/25
this is good and would be worth continuing
| wontanara chapter 6 . 1/20
This was lovely. I'm sad to see it's unfinished.
| Gothic Rain chapter 6 . 12/30/2017
Stopping here, eh? Ah, that's alright. This story seriously gave a much-needed wake-up call to my muse. However, as much as I would love to start writing, publishing, and updating my stories I admit that I need to get my work done first.
Oh, the joys of having a real life. Just kidding.
Anyways, this is a pure genius story and delivered brilliantly. Hopefully, I'll be able to manage such a style with my own literature. Good luck to you, wherever you are and whatever you're doing! :)
| Gothic Rain chapter 5 . 12/30/2017
Well, that was an unexpected reaction of Lucius... perhaps Desdemona planned that though should they go snooping? Either way, it pays off. Short chapter.. I was pretty startled by the length but neither do I particularly mind.
| Gothic Rain chapter 4 . 12/30/2017
This is brilliant. I loved this last part with runes. Hopefully, Virgo and she can talk over this new development and make-up. I can see them as good friends in the future. I imagine her parents manipulating began the separation from reality and fantasy for her, allowing her to really begin to push her parents and their ideas away without being emotionally compromised.
| Gothic Rain chapter 3 . 12/30/2017
Propaganda at its highest. The scene with Wulberga and her was my favorite, especially the closure with Moonlight Sonata. Really love this.