Reviews for Dark desires
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
Z chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Awesome story! Good job
Dick Suck chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
Wish I could suck did that good
Alva chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Oh my f*ck*ng god! That last line was so perfect there! Are you sure this is your first time? I dont see anything non-great in here! Also, at that part when Jack came into Pitchs mouth I was eating vanilla quark so I was like, "Oh, so thats what it might taste like?..." I know, I have a dirty mind, please dont hate me!
Just curious, who was in your room when you were writing this?
(No flames around here:))
DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
oooo, yesyesyes theyre established :D. and the ending was great ahahah
AwksFayce chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Ayyyy lmao
This is great! Ah, smut, yes.
Also, great job with someone being in the room with you and still writing haha
EvocativeDecadence chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I like this story a lot!
darthcat chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Okey um...WOAH!
Autumn B chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
That was amazing.
Hannah Stalnaker chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
you see? this is the shit i love...ok,ok,ok,...i'm 14...but who cares...this made me SO FUCKIN' HORNY! and the other reason i love these smut fics is because you guys are so much more brave than me. As i would say 'erection' or 'cock' or 'manhood', you allwould go as far as dick,p%# s, and every other sexy dirty word for all that shit. ):), erm...pardon but vagina and penis and anus and scrotum and clitoris and all the doctor names are fuckin' NASTY! THEY SOUND LIKE FRIGGIN' DISEASES! anyway,really good smut fic,girl. I've got a novel called "Black Ice" and am on the sequel,"Frozen Shadows." working on rewriting the 1st cause it im making it better. so im writing in both. talk to me if you want me to give you a teasing yet in depth synopsis.
Insanity Allegra chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Jack: .
Pitch: Update 'Corruption'!
Insane: Ask nice, Pitch!
Insane: *Death Glare of Doom and Destruction*
Pitch: 0.0 *small voice* Please?
Insane: Better...
Wishfull-star chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
that was great you know how to write a good story:)
coockie8 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Oh my God, that was beautiful, I now officially ship this couple!
blondebutnotblonde chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
very good oneshot for your first time :D
SilvanaCrowe chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Mm, I love this!
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