Reviews for Dissolve
Guest chapter 5 . 2/1
Great story, but I’m really not getting the premise. I’m assuming the type of fighting Junior is doing is illegal, but hiw is he throwing the fight? Throwing a fight means purposely losing, but he is always winning. And examine how your competitors fight and what their weaknesses and figuring out how to overcome them are isn’t cheating; it’s what every professional boxer or player in any sport does.. So I see the danger because it’s presumably an illegal sport with unsavory characters, but I’m not really getting what The extra bad part of what Junior and Sheldon are doing is supposed to be.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/12/2019
I know this is way late but I just read your very well written story. At first, I thought you were really being fair to Leonard, but then I reread it and I was surprised I didn't like it as well. I mean it's like they didn't even think of Leonard until he came back. Then it was like they didn't really feel that bad, like it was just something they had to deal with. I didn't really see any real regret or remorse at how they had hurt him. Sheldon's speech really seems sanctimonious. If I had been Leonard, I would have told them what to do with their speeches. There is just no empathy there at all from either of them. Of course there is also the point if they cared all so much for him, why did they cheat on him? Then there was after they were done - it seemed like it was - well, that's over, we don't have to deal with that anymore; especially with Sheldon and George mocking his crying. It somehow ending up being shallow and insincere. it just seemed like they wanted him to be okay just because it would make them feel better, not really caring how Leonard felt.

Shenny always seems to contain the belief that because they fall for each other, it doesn't matter who they hurt. Life is about choices and considering the results of those choices.
CarissaWinchester chapter 19 . 9/30/2019
I was not here from the beginning but this story was amazing you are my favorite writer when it comes to big bang theory thank you so much I loved the gorge character you made much better than the one in season 12 thank you for this you are so talented
mi-shell87 chapter 19 . 9/20/2019
Absolutely loved this story! :-)
Clavyus chapter 19 . 7/3/2019
Cool story. Well-pacef and hard to put down. Liked the Junior character and the the him and Shenny played.
Lioness25 chapter 19 . 6/23/2019
That was absolutely beautiful and I loved how everything turned out in the end. Perfect.
Lee kadivar chapter 19 . 2/23/2019
Words cannot describe how much this story has effected me. I have loved every aspect of it and wish there was more. But I honestly don't think there should be. You wrapped it up very nicely. I only wish that I could write this good. The prolong had me confused as I couldn't tell when the chapter started and how the prolog fit with the story until I got to that part of the story. I am going to look at your other works and see if I like them as well. Thank for such a great read.
Ivory Tears chapter 19 . 2/18/2019
I went back and reread this fantastic Shenny story. It’s hands down one of my all time favorites on any site! Thank you for writing and posting it. I wish you all the best, and hope you continue writing! :)
boricuagizmo1 chapter 19 . 3/12/2018
great story great ending
SusanMarieS chapter 19 . 2/9/2018
reread thank you again
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 19 . 1/5/2018
Brilliant story. I enjoyed it very much.
YokaiAngel chapter 19 . 12/3/2017
Tbbtshennyfan chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
It was a great read loved your vision.
Spawn Hades chapter 19 . 4/7/2017
I LOVE Sheldon and George Juniors' bond in this story. I wish more stories had Shenny with sheldons big bro watching over them.
Platinum Blondie chapter 19 . 1/18/2017
This is a fantastic story. I read a lot of fiction, both here and in regular novels, and I have to say that this is one of the best written stories I have read in a long while. The characters were obviously ooc, but were well crafted with a strong plotline.
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