|Reviews for The Fourth's Legacy|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/9
Sunset is when the sun goes down at the end of the day. SUNRISE is when the Sun comes up at Dawn. Also, "weary" tired & should be replaced with "wary" (meaning cautious) in parts of your story.
| Hellhound monster girl lover chapter 7 . 5/27
| Hellhound monster girl lover chapter 5 . 5/27
where is Shino
| Percy Jackson Angel of Death chapter 9 . 5/10
Fuck ye-EEEP! I shouldn't swear
Eh who gives a fuck
| Percy Jackson Angel of Death chapter 3 . 5/10
kakashi can sum up anything naruto does with a girl in one word "SHIT"
| my 2 guys chapter 10 . 11/23/2015
that was good keep the chapters coming
| demonzone2571 chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
I'll adopt this story. Just send me the story via email:
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 3 . 8/11/2015
Bravo, excellent, wonderful, your prose, ideas, and interpretation of the characters are phenomenal, however I think I begin to see the problem you have/had. Naruto is leaning towards the too strong side, as well as the point where some would expect him to crap marble and gold, too little flaws that make him human, but it could be offset by having some characters -cough Sakura cough- claim that Naruto's altruistic and humanitarian acts stem from selfishness, as well as Naruto having some kind of rage button, like Ed Elric's complex about his height, or Mei Terumi's penchant for having innocent words that leave Ao's mouth cause her to feel like he is calling her an old hag or something. But if you read this review you might be able to continue the story yourself, even though I would love to adopt this fic.
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 8/11/2015
In the outlines for my fics Itachi took out some aggressors,( Self-Defense) while Danzo, Obito, and some ROOT members killed 98% Itachi kills Fugaku after Mikoto (That's the name of Sasuke's mom, right?) learns about the coup and Fugaku attempts to shut his "wife" up and get the Mangekyo, and Itachi kills Fugaku to avenge his mother. And Itachi plans for Sasuke to kill him, due to having a terminal illness,
| theaceoffire chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
You may wish to fix this typo: "But no one remembered him having a soon"
_ I found it humorous, but you will likely wanna fix it.
| Asumawhy chapter 10 . 1/11/2015
i am kinda sad that this story is not being written anymore but the reason for it is understandable
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
well, a rather interesting start... looking forward to see how this progresses
| Tsukoblue chapter 8 . 9/19/2014
Please don't turn this into a Naruto/Bleach crossover
| Tsukoblue chapter 7 . 9/19/2014
Don't use Hanabi in the harem if you will have Hinata in it, Any children between Naruto/Hinata and Naruto/Hanabi would end up being siblings and cousins otherwise
| uzuuchi007 chapter 10 . 8/13/2014