Reviews for The Fourth's Legacy
theaceoffire chapter 1 . 3/7
You may wish to fix this typo: "But no one remembered him having a soon"

_ I found it humorous, but you will likely wanna fix it.
Asumawhy chapter 10 . 1/11
i am kinda sad that this story is not being written anymore but the reason for it is understandable
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
well, a rather interesting start... looking forward to see how this progresses
Tsukoblue chapter 8 . 9/19/2014
Naruto/Karin

Please don't turn this into a Naruto/Bleach crossover
Tsukoblue chapter 7 . 9/19/2014
Don't use Hanabi in the harem if you will have Hinata in it, Any children between Naruto/Hinata and Naruto/Hanabi would end up being siblings and cousins otherwise
uzuuchi007 chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
Nice
jhawk046 chapter 10 . 6/30/2014
Well we have another quitter here!
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
not bad but a tad kulunky try adding more detail to flesh it out more. make a prologue on how the group too k nartou, his treatment before he left. also you can always give them ambu masks to keep things secret till later
uzumaki54 chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
Death to sakura
Angel of Darkness119 chapter 10 . 6/28/2014
That is a terrible fate to this Story, but at least you put an end to the hoping for a new chapter.
When this Story is adopted could you please post by who so that we can read further?
xxAristotlexxx chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
After reading the first chapter I have a number of (minor) peeves which I hope will be answered in the coming chapters.

1. Why was Itachi let so easily back into Konoha? Surely there'd be a kill on sight declaration under his name in the bingo book.

2. It feels rushed, albeit not as rushed as other stories I've read. Again, I'll read on to investigate.

Overall so far I think this is an okay story from what I've read but will proceed to read the rest.
angelusjmw chapter 3 . 6/23/2014
naruto dragon champion is naru/harem with hinata sakura ino temari tenten kin tsunade anko kurenai and few others in the harem for naruto

while asuma kiba shino shikamaru choji kiba kakashi is with oc females
silverback95 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Cool so far nice ideas
ZRAIARZ chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
U do know that when minato died haku was like 2 and itachi 6 so how r they n his group
Dracoessa chapter 9 . 2/6/2014
Yes, yes haku is extremely troublesome.
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