|Reviews for City Of Angels|
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
Hey Sharkey...Okay, first off...Holy cow! This is a well written piece of fiction! I have been reading Doctor Who fics for a while, but this one interests me greatly...I actually never considered the possibility that clone-Doctor-10 and Rose Tyler would have a son...But anything is possible! And I must tell you Sharkey, please keep up the good work...
| James Simmonds chapter 8 . 6/26/2013
That was absolutely amazing. Good story line!
| SharkeyJ chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
So you've found out WHO Nathan is but WHAT do you think his secret is?
| Dasyuridae chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Nice start! I really like the idea of the weeping angel planet, and it's looking good but remember to paragraph it when people are speaking. Also, proofread your grammar, for example: Clara followed" "So is there a faster way of getting to the city because that is too far for me?" Clara asked.
That's double Clara, which is perfectly legitimate but kinda makes the sentence stilted and when Clara is talking, the because and everything after makes the question mark kind of redundant. Otherwise, great!
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Um...if I may, I would like to be perfectly honest...Your plot is very interesting, and you have a good writing form...But, I think a couple of things that would help would be to 1: Maybe space out the story into short paragraphs - (it makes the story a bit easier to read, trust me)...and 2: In the majority of Doctor Who fiction I've read, everyone almost always capitalizes The Doctor's name (but this is at your discretion)...these are just suggestions I've received from other authors on the site...Anyways, please keep up the good work Sharkey! I'm looking forward to seeing the Angels...
| SharkeyJ chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
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