Reviews for Galadriel's Test
dianaprincess chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
That gave me shivers. It was so good! I'd always wondered what Galadriel was thinking when she was tempted by the Ring.
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Well, this story was captivating.

Since these are Galadriel's thoughts and Galadriel is mainly speaking in this one-shot story, shouldn't she be the first main character of this story? I see you have Frodo and Sam before Galadriel, which doesn't seem to fit since Frodo and Sam don't speak at all in this story, but are more in the background and are hardly mentioned except towards the very end of the story.

As for constructive criticism, you did well capturing Galadriel's thoughts as she questions whether or not to take the Ring from Frodo. There is a lot of emotions coming from Galadriel in this one-shot, which you did well showing. This story does act like its a book-verse, but I wonder if it is also has a bit of movie-verse as well.

Nice work.

-Aria Breuer
DancingChestnut chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
It's good! I like it :)