Reviews for Torn
littlejuliet chapter 10 . 8/19/2013
Awesome - as always! :D
Moonflower04 chapter 10 . 8/18/2013
Ohhh, now the gangs altogether, except for Jon who is off doing his own thing. :P

Still, I want to see what Alyssa and Quill's connection will be, and AC references now?! I'm excited! :D
NooShoak chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
Another great chapter!
MadameHyde chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
I loved Alyssa's musings about everyone getting along(ish). It seems just so ... Perfect, right there. And YAY, everyone's one step closer to being together.

And STILL no one knows her name is Ty. :)

Keep at it! Can't wait to see where it goes
Boys Do Like Girls chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
Well, that was fucking awesome.

Tense, exciting, and now pretty much all the Dragonborn's are together! Fantastic.

'I daresay we all have a lot of titles.' Oh yeah, I think that's probably true.
BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
Huzzah! The gang's all together... except for Jon, who's off doing his own thing and no one knows where he is :P
So next chapter, we get some answers about Alyssa and Quill... that should be interesting. I'd ask if it was accessible to those of us with a limited knowledge of Assassin's Creed, but judging by the way that you're writing that angle in, I'm thinking that it will. :) Can't wait!
Boys Do Like Girls chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
Damn it! I wrote a long review, but it was deleted. Okay, whatever.

Basically, great stuff. Liked Kajsa's afterlife problems, the conversation between Morwyn.

I was happily reading before I noticed the draconic 'Kodaav.' Then, I had to decipher it. I hope you're happy. (Glares)

Well, 'seek the one who wields Kodaav.' Cool. Plus, I translated Kruziikstrun as ancient mountain, or there about. Throat of the World in Pass? Maybe.

NOOOOO! The only characters who could find Jon were knocked out and possibly killed! (Nice cliffhanger by the way.)

(Huffs) Fine, whatever. I don't care.

I read the next chapter, and find out what happened to Quill and Sun, at work! (Because that's what I do.)
Moonflower04 chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
I will have to say, I loved the personal talk between Ty and Kajsa! I thought it was wuite dramatic, especially since Kajsa loved Ulfric, who killed Ty in the end! D:

Hehe, I love Ty so much, she is honestly crazy! But you do a brilliant job writing her anyways. :)

I'm really excited to see more of the mystery unravel! Sooo please update soon! :)
littlejuliet chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
Ah cliffhanger much!
I so can't wait for more!
Anonymous chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Could you put a relative time-frame on when you will be releasing the books? Say, a month? 6 weeks? etc
MadameHyde chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Haha you're most welcome. :)

I love the bonding between dragonborn, here. I love the "for the record" line. Gives me chills, it's just so perfect

Can't wait to figure out what that damn temple is :) keep at it!
BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
I know, I know - I'm really impatient for more chapters too! (And I know I already gave you feedback on the scene with Ty and Kajsa, but I'll just say it again: LOVE IT.) *Wink*
NooShoak chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Another great chapter!

Let's see how much of that message I can translate: "I'm at your mercy", "The wisdom to defeat the curse, lies in the carved stone. Seek the Dragonborn who wields Bear(?) , who of the ancient storm. Find the Dragonborns, and (Be-Spring-Sky) the Wings of Fire". "In no time you will, seek the ancient storm, Be-spring-sky... the... wings of fire".

Well, It pretty clearly means: form an adventuring party with the other Dragonborns, and head to the temple.
Anonymous chapter 8 . 8/9/2013
I've looked through your profile and read your other ES stories, and their isn't very much actually about Alyssa in them. Do you have or think you could write one of your stories on her "dragonborn" adventure, and tell us why she's called the dragon rider?
skyflower51 chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Your author's note made me crack up so much. XD
Anyway, sorry for the delay in leaving a review! This was great fun to read - I liked the bit with Jon at the beginning... I wonder what exactly is going on with him... The bit with the bolts was hilarious, especially when Quill accidentally shot that wraith. So it looks like Sun and Quill may encounter the others soon...
This chapter made me laugh harder than any other so far. Great job! :D
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