|Reviews for Torn|
| Lay Down Hunter chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Awk, are all the Dragonborns female? Did I miss one kind of memo? Most likely, I miss all the bloody memos...
| Lay Down Hunter chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Throwing down her robes on the first date? Woah, kinky.
| littlejuliet chapter 23 . 4/14/2014
awesome stuff - you are keeping us on the edge of our seat!
| xShadowmere chapter 23 . 4/12/2014
Awesome, awesome chapter. I cannot wait for the next. I NEED TO KNOW THE SECRETS. Buy really, fantastic work. For so many complex and crazy ideas, the story is coming together very nicely.
| skyflower51 chapter 23 . 4/10/2014
Stinahlok, hmm... I have certain suspicions about him, but I'm going to keep them to myself, because I bet they're wrong, I usually am. :/
It's really interesting reading about the Dragon Priests. I mean... they're not exactly nice characters, but they're interesting. And I am very eager to find out where exactly Alyssa's got to.
Please update soon! I'll be looking out for that thread to pluck, but right now I can't find it, so it looks like I'm stuck waiting for the next chapter. :)
| NooShoak chapter 23 . 4/9/2014
Hmm... A visit from Stinahlok, the Free Sky Hunter. Intriguing...
Another Great Chapter!
| ManhattanTheory chapter 23 . 4/9/2014
We wonder how does this Stinahlok guy fit into all of these. He/she/it seems pretty suspicious to us.
Oh yeah, by the way nice chapter. ;)
| BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 23 . 4/9/2014
I'm not good at unraveling things, so I'm still really confused and my head's spinning and all that - but it's a good feeling because there's a lot of suspense in there as well, and I'm excited for what's to come. :) In the meantime, I can only hope that some of my questions will be answered...
This "Stihnalok" thing... I'm not sure what to think about him. I'm very suspicious of him, for one. And what about Alyssa? Will she ever be found?
Anyway, good chapter and I can't wait for the next!
| skyflower51 chapter 22 . 4/3/2014
'Niirah' means 'echo,' I believe? I hope I'm right, because I was the one who submitted that word to thu'um . org... XD
Wow, I am now very, very intrigued by Aodhfin's story! And of course, that's exactly the sort of reckless thing J'shana would do for her sworn sister, and of course she'd go and get herself killed. You wrote that brilliantly. I was really on edge reading that bit... and then I burst out laughing and Morwyn's... interesting interuption. Looks like she's in a bit of trouble, though, I hope this turns out okay...
And Death? Agh, why do you have to make so many questions?!
Awesome chapter! And thanks so much for mentioning Dragonheart! :D
| NooShoak chapter 22 . 4/2/2014
Another great chapter!
But who could the necromancer be... none of the characters I've thought of exactly fit.
| ManhattanTheory chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
And so the excitement, questions, mysteries and riddles continues. Man, our heads are about to explode from all the unanswered questions here but still, nice chapter by the way! :)
| InfinityArk chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
(Evil Laughter) at last he has arrived! (More Evil Laughter) Victory is at hand!
I lloovvee the way Aodhfin was written. I literally did an evil laugh when I figured out it was him.
Oh my, it seems as though Morwyn may be having a bit of trouble. I wonder who Death was talking to...
| BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
Ah, nothing like metaphysical intrigue, mysterious nightmares, and personifications of death to thicken the plot! I wonder who was the "they" that was talking to Death...
| Moonflower04 chapter 21 . 4/1/2014
NOOOO SERRAH! D: I feel so sad that he's down for the count! Well, I'm happy Arela was so determined to help him, because that would have been too cruel to leave him behind. Still excited to see what lurks in the Underpaths. Awesome chapter though, so excited for the next one! :D
| Moonflower04 chapter 20 . 3/28/2014
Awesome! I loved the chapter wholeheartedly, and I'm excited to see where this dark tunnel leads. I'm also excited to see if they meet the Necromancer soon.
As for the other group, I can't wait to see what will happen next. :)