|Reviews for Torn|
| NooShoak chapter 22 . 4/2/2014
Another great chapter!
But who could the necromancer be... none of the characters I've thought of exactly fit.
| Rigged Bomb chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
And so the excitement, questions, mysteries and riddles continues. Man, our heads are about to explode from all the unanswered questions here but still, nice chapter by the way! :)
| InfinityArk chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
(Evil Laughter) at last he has arrived! (More Evil Laughter) Victory is at hand!
I lloovvee the way Aodhfin was written. I literally did an evil laugh when I figured out it was him.
Oh my, it seems as though Morwyn may be having a bit of trouble. I wonder who Death was talking to...
| BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 22 . 4/1/2014
Ah, nothing like metaphysical intrigue, mysterious nightmares, and personifications of death to thicken the plot! I wonder who was the "they" that was talking to Death...
| Moonflower04 chapter 21 . 4/1/2014
NOOOO SERRAH! D: I feel so sad that he's down for the count! Well, I'm happy Arela was so determined to help him, because that would have been too cruel to leave him behind. Still excited to see what lurks in the Underpaths. Awesome chapter though, so excited for the next one! :D
| Moonflower04 chapter 20 . 3/28/2014
Awesome! I loved the chapter wholeheartedly, and I'm excited to see where this dark tunnel leads. I'm also excited to see if they meet the Necromancer soon.
As for the other group, I can't wait to see what will happen next. :)
| skyflower51 chapter 21 . 3/28/2014
Oh, poor Serrah... I hope he's okay. I wonder how Sarja knows so much? I daresay we'll learn the answers soon.
Why do I have a feeling that the (relative) peace and quiet the seven main questors are getting is only the calm before the storm?
This was a very interesting chapter, with a really ominous tone... Please update soon! You keep making more questions that I want to learn the answers to!
| DevoutOfSheogorath chapter 21 . 3/28/2014
...Now you got me utterly confused again. I suspect Sarja is another Laryssan, but aside from that youve got us quite a riddle. I understand there might be other groups of Dragonborns who found shelter... maybe? Sarja seems to have a little more of the "whole picture", but wherefrom?
And now the Divines might gain some leverage, too... all quite confusing! :D
| littlejuliet chapter 21 . 3/27/2014
Yay - great chapter - I like the idea of fear itself being a threat for the lot underground but it does sound mighty creepy no less for the priests being there too, and my heart was pounding during the battle scene - poor Serrah!
| BrunetteAuthorette99 chapter 21 . 3/26/2014
Yeah, the Underpaths are already giving me a bad feeling. (I've probably mentioned it in my review for the last chapter, but I thought it was worth mentioning again. Underground tunnels... just... no.)
And am I sensing a game of Scar or Story coming up? (Please say yes! Always entertaining, always a little tragic... I just like it in general.)
| Phantasys chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
Ulfric as part of the thalmor? What? The dossier said that Ulfric was considered an asset not because he was with them but because he could be used to distract the empire right?
| NooShoak chapter 21 . 3/26/2014
Hmm... interesting. Another great chapter!
| Rigged Bomb chapter 21 . 3/26/2014
Oh a new dragonborn! Though we wonder whose story does she came from.
| DevoutOfSheogorath chapter 20 . 3/21/2014
Multiversum stories always get me.
You did a terrific job at hinting at Alyssas adventures in the early chapters - had me going over all those other dragonborns stories in a frenzy to try and find some clues about what happened to her and why she had those suspiciosly Assassins creed-like wrist blades... :D
And then theres Tiberia! Hell, I MISSED reading about that sister in faith of mine! :)
The only character who comes across quite different from his original is Jon Stormcloak. But I guess these days its difficult to contact BoysDoLikeGirls for aid, isnt it?
So Im really looking forward to the next chapter - and the Chronicles you promised! 400k words got my mouth all watery... :D
| littlejuliet chapter 20 . 3/19/2014
There was just so much awesome writing in this chapter - you've hit it right on the mark. The description of the entrance the priests opened along with the events happing around them, the hint of something down in the dark with them and the light giving out when it did - pure artistry.
You're making us all very impatient for the next chapter - keep it up!