Reviews for The Oath
kiki2222 chapter 2 . 2/2
You made me cry! I love this story!
StarOfFeanor chapter 2 . 7/30/2017
My heart! I cannot tell u how much this chapter made me cry. I had to stop reading it like ten times because I couldn't see the words through the tears. So beautiful! :-'(

I can't wait for the next chapter so it can soothe the agony! Im crying again!
Wolf'sVine chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
I cried. This was heartbreaking and painful and wonderful and vivid and spectacular and... just, just so very awe-inspiring. I'm not sure what else to write at the moment... I'm kinda stuck on trying not to keep crying. This fic touched my heart deeply and knowing that there is a sequel that will, hopefully, be more cheerful or less likely to make me cry has me just wanting to go and read... which is what I'm gonna do. I wanna tell you my favorite part in reading this: Is when Pharaoh Atemu is actually scared he's gonna die and relies on Seth to help ease his anguish for that... at least temporarily. I like that because often I think people forget that Yami is human and can feel scared or petty or pouty or gleeful or happy... he's more than a sacrifice so that the world can be saved and I think you made that very clear beautifully! I'm not sure if I'm makin' any sense or if you understand what I'm saying but I just wanted to tell you that. I'm so glad I read this! Uh, sorry for the long review.
Hirami chapter 2 . 10/3/2016
Beautiful. I love the tragedy and desperation that flows through this chapter...
Hirami chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
guh...this is so perfectly written... from the intensity of their meeting and the first fight, through their struggles and to their first love making... I love every tiny bit about this *w* beautiful.
deeDee chapter 2 . 4/29/2015
OK, so positive:

-Good prose, punchy, easy to read, and the dialogue is convincingly ancient sounding.
-Consistent and coherent characterisation.


-Maybe a bit OOC? Especially on Seth's side; he seems to have given up his rival stance once they grew up.
-I don't know if 'selfish' is really Atem's problem when he puts Egypt first and tried to put Seth first by refusing a relationship. It's more single-mindedness/assuming he knows what's best for Seth without asking, and I don't think Atem in story would ever apologise for putting his country first. Seth seems like he'd understand that more, especially only Mokuba really matters to him above Kaiba Corp.
Renee chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
I was sixteen when I first read this fic! Wow...six years later and I still cried. Oh I missed reading your fics sooooo much! Is it possible that you could repost "Waste" by any chance. I would love you forever if you did! 3

And congrats to your engagement!
sherabo chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Ah man . . . . . . ahhhhhhhhhhh man. This is the reason I don't read stories in which the protagonist dies, it's just to painful. I knew it was coming but once anyone starts reading your fic's you just can't turn away. Somewhere in the back of my mind I hoped you'd go on some bazar roller coaster ride and change the end to something else. I especially enjoyed Seth's life afterwards with his sense of obligation to honor Atemu's wishes and commitment to the land, loyal. However it also explained some of the sadness and detachment in the present day Seto. Was that your intention to connect the two personalities? Egypt has always fascinated my heart and it's a land I want to visit one day, after reading your descriptions of the country, its smells, its energy I'm long for it more. Ah man . . . . . . I'm seriously going to read this again. It's not easy to write a love story with this level of intensity and keep it so pure. Ah . . . . man. You filled in the blanks with the anime especially Enter the Dragons and it's beautiful. I hope this is the first of many to come using this time line. Well later and KEEP REPOSTING ! peace
sherabo chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I drown in the ancient stories of the past and the development of their love is so touching and very believable, however the omen is sad, but I'm happy they had this moment in time. peace...
ScrewTheRules chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
But please please please please please...
*continues for 5 mins*
please please please pppppllllleeeeaaaasssseee update!
Your stories are the best I've ever seen!
That's against the rules isn't it?
EvilMidget6 chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
Oh...too sad :( now I really need the future part...
EvilMidget6 chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Not too long - great, and very sensual stuff! On to chapter two...
Atem no koibito chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
This made me cry. Cry. I cried! *Sob* such a beautiful story. But that sequel better be cheerful like you say! I'll be waiting for it because I love all your stories. You're such an amazing writer! Love your storis!
G chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
Such an awesome story. I cannot wait for the sequel! Fantastic!
dragonlady222 chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
THis was so sad. I hope they meet again in another life and it goes better for them.
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