Reviews for The Proposal
Lilly chapter 45 . 2/17
I love this story but needed longer chapters and better English it's a good story but could have been better js
suzy 2010 chapter 22 . 1/5
Poor broken Edward.
suzy 2010 chapter 21 . 1/5
So what has Carly and Nana got planned.
suzy 2010 chapter 20 . 1/5
Now what will Nana do.
suzy 2010 chapter 19 . 1/5
Poor Nana is so confused.
suzy 2010 chapter 18 . 1/5
But will Nana help Carly.
suzy 2010 chapter 17 . 1/5
Children can be so sweet.
Ju Martinhao chapter 72 . 12/5/2013
I loved this story from beginning to end. I had so much fun with Edward and Bella's teasings, and I laugh so much with Carley and Suzzie's comments. I loved everything.
Congratulations for your story and thank you for sharing it with us.
Hugs,
Ju
IsabellaMarie31 chapter 72 . 11/15/2013
Loved it. Alot and I loved The Edward in these story he was a very out going guy.
Darkward Darling chapter 72 . 10/7/2013
Very cute little story- enjoyed it!
zina588 chapter 72 . 9/22/2013
Sweet story , i loved it! Thanks for sharing.
just a fan chapter 11 . 9/11/2013
why so short many short paragraphs ? I like the story, I'm just curious.
divyvicki chapter 72 . 9/7/2013
This was fun, thanks for sharing it.
divyvicki chapter 71 . 9/7/2013
What a horrible proposal, but very fitting of their relationship.
divyvicki chapter 70 . 9/7/2013
Boy, Charlie and Edward sure have a love/hate relationship.
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