Reviews for The Proposal
morena.davidson.3 chapter 24 . 11/27/2014
Your English doesn't suck...but a good Beta would be very helpful. :)
Guest chapter 72 . 11/23/2014
Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
People at my fb group love this story. We are waiting for the sequel. Plzzzz write it.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write a sequel!
Sherry80 chapter 72 . 7/14/2014
Not much into drabbles but this was so cute
Edward's spouse chapter 72 . 7/2/2014
excellent story.
tululah chapter 72 . 6/8/2014
Very entertaining.
CharlieA6654 chapter 44 . 5/22/2014
i think its getting better. but if u write another story. make the chapters longer. how bout every 2 days u write it but u collect it in the same file. u'll just update once a week but it will be a long chap. and everyones happy. kay? Charlie
CharlieA6654 chapter 5 . 5/22/2014
i hate that Tanya is being a good character here. it just doesn't suit her. i mean like a good wife. and Edward is happy about her. EDWARD IS ONLY HAPPY WITH BELLA. thats what true twiharts like. still liking the story. will continue to read it. but if i finish it and i don't like it maybe i will only fav not follow. sorry. Charlie. p.s. look at my profile about my self
Lilly chapter 45 . 2/17/2014
I love this story but needed longer chapters and better English it's a good story but could have been better js
suzy 2010 chapter 22 . 1/5/2014
Poor broken Edward.
suzy 2010 chapter 21 . 1/5/2014
So what has Carly and Nana got planned.
suzy 2010 chapter 20 . 1/5/2014
Now what will Nana do.
suzy 2010 chapter 19 . 1/5/2014
Poor Nana is so confused.
suzy 2010 chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
But will Nana help Carly.
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