Reviews for Sin
morticaaddams chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
A wonderful story, albiet short though. I love the religous guilt theme in both the stories.
NoneYoBisnatch chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
... That was not smutty?! It was OK for a clean fanfic. But smut is using the word cock or dick. Saying things like," as i grabbed his dick he shuddered in delight." DIRTY things like that, OK?! I just wanted you to know that was not dirty. I could write filthy fanfics and im only 13! Then again i am a huge perv... But still, WHERE IS THE SMUT IN THIS! Im sorry if i come off as a mean person i just wanted something dirty and it wasnt. But for a clean one it was good
Domomomo chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
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OH MY GOD

OH MY GOD

OH MY GOOOOODDDDDD

This is absolutely wonderful! I am justfdkslfj;lkadj

I'M SO HONORED YOU WOULD GET INSPIRATION FROM MY FIC ;U;

I absolutely adore that you went with the same tone and theme. You did a marvelous job, thank you so much for writing it!
Luciangrl chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Cool concept , religious guilt. You really don't see it as often as you'd expect with this pairing. The story flowed really well but the problem is... I liked it. I wish it was longer! You need to have more confidence in your smut. You were doing fine! It was a good place to end it but I don't think it should have been rated M. I think you'll get more views if you drop it to a T rating after all anything bad is mostly implied anyway.