|Reviews for One Misfired Spell Later|
| Mr Big chapter 17 . 5h ago
Er isnt this a bit stupid, I mean the whole thing with Fleur. Why did Harry not use that shfting thing he used to get away from Hogwarts and Mad eye, either to get away from Fleur or to save Hermione from getting hurt. This sort of thing makes it even less worthy of reading while putting up with all the errors which I am assuming are being made because English is not the writers first language.
| little-bast chapter 17 . 7h ago
Interesting so far...Keep the chapters coming!
Hopefully Snape will get what he deserves and Dumbledore's reputation will take a massive hit and allow his manipulations to begin to unfold.
Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see what you have planned...
Hoping for an update soon...
| DarkHeart81 chapter 17 . 10h ago
Good chapter. Would have liked to see Hermione get a few more hits in but I loved Harry's reaction at the end.
| Beyondthesea16 chapter 17 . 11h ago
nice update, harry should tell them thanks but no thanks and leave and find another country to go to another, he can't trust fleur wont try something else and her parents aren't really stopping her, and glad remus finally caught on to sirius and emma's issue (sirius and emma really needs help, soon), waiting for more
| V. L. Crawford chapter 17 . 18h ago
| Jordana Babe chapter 17 . 3/8
Rock on Harry you tell her the rights of it all. I loved this chapter and I'm sorry for not posting review the last rew I have a sick house and it wont stop. Well I can't wait for a new chapter I want to know how this ends with Fleur and her little world crashing
| Indecisive Bob chapter 17 . 3/8
Yup. Both Hermione and Fleur were being incredibly stupid about this whole mess. Hermione let her emotions get the best of her, and Fleur just acted like a petulant bully. "I want Harry! Harry will want me if I beat up his current girlfriend!" Yeah, as Harry just showed, that isn't going to fly at all.
Keep up the good work!
| anotherboarduser chapter 17 . 3/8
I like this chapter a lot.
I like the duel and how Harry chooses Hermione over Fleur anyway.
I look forward to see what happens next.
| Vegasman59 chapter 17 . 3/8
Flier isn't Happy, well you can't break Harry and Hermione up with a magical crow bar!
| Penny is wise chapter 17 . 3/8
Awesome chapter. At least you had Hermione put up somewhat of a fight.
| amberpup chapter 17 . 3/8
Fast as it should have been, and Gabrielle as sweet as candy.
All is good within the world..lol
Can we get a friendship between Gabrielle and Harry?
Harry could always use a cute comic relief in his life.
| Finwitch1 chapter 17 . 3/8
Good for you, Harry!
| Lady Firemane chapter 17 . 3/8
First off, I want to say that I really liked this story when it first began. That being said, I began to enjoy it less and less starting from Mr. Granger's death. I'm not opposed to the death per say but all the unless army drama following that just started to irk me.
Sirius is being a criminal people think he is in his treatment of Emma. Taking advantage was bad enough in her state but to compound it with the use of mind altering methods. That's no better than drugging her or getting her drunk in my book. Sirius has a lot to lose. Among them, his relationship with his godson on this matter.
Secondly, Harry going to an all girl school disguised as a girl was ridiculous and bound to fail. What was the reason he could not be tutored by someone if not Remus or Sirius? Or be disguised as a different looking boy?
And now this whole thing with Fleur is just one big mess and again ridiculous. Although I give you kudos for how you handled the fight and how Harry responded afterwards, Hermione would have at least gone into the fight already knowing what a Veela was. She would have research it the moment she heard about it. She wouldn't have made that mistake with the fire spell and would have used water base and ice based spell.
Dousing her with a water spell and marring her beautiful image would have been enough to enrage Fleur to turn creature. At this point, Hermione still could have lost but it could have giving her a better standing in her loss. Only Harry seemed to realize how wrong it was for a seventeen year old to challenge a thirteen year old.
There are so many things going on that it just doesn't seem plausible that Harry can come out on top between Voldemort and Dumbledore. Especially with the adults in Harry's life being so irresponsible.
Please bring the story back on track. You're an excellent writer and that talent is wasted on petty side story lines like this.
| harryhermionealways chapter 17 . 3/8
It is time for someone to put Fleur in her place! So glad Harry still stood up to her and hope Hermione makes a full recovery. Hope Harry and Hermione keep ignoring Fleur and stick together.
| GenetiX23 chapter 17 . 3/8
Yeah, this was a good choice. Hermione's intelligent, yes, but come on. Fleur was picked by the goblet, which, canonically, did pick the best students. We never saw her duel in canon, as far as I recall at least.
I expect Harry to be a bit annoyed at Hermione about her refusal to listen to him or treat him like a person, but it should wear off when he realizes that it was mostly the heat of the moment and hermione's insecurities that caused her to accept Fleur's challenge.
In any case, I enjoyed this chapter. Gabrielle is still adorable and the fight scene went nicely.