Reviews for Teeth
LtKettch chapter 62 . 3/5
This is such an excellent story. Harry’s relationships with Bruce, Fred, George and Loki are extremely well written. I hope you will come back to this story when you have time.
Only suggestion I have is to not give so much away in your author notes. I realize they can be skipped, but sometimes it’s hard to do without seeing spoilers. Your writing is good enough to stand on its own. You don’t need to explain or justify why you make certain decisions or where you think the story is going to go. Your story speaks for itself.
Thanks for sharing.
realfan16 chapter 20 . 2/25
lmao! imagine my surprise when j saw the AN while skimming thru about no crossover content until now. lol I'm from chp9. been skipping since then looking for crossover part. just applauding the patience of all those who had no choice but to read thru it all. ...lesson learnt when skipping thru texts...if it's truly important dw it'll be mentioned...briefly but that's the price to pay for skipping. so lemme go back to my research adios!
realfan16 chapter 7 . 2/23
lmao i mean no offense by saying this, tnx for the AN(I'm glad i didn't skip itcause i deadass thought there was a ship sailing with Snape.
realfan16 chapter 1 . 2/23
scales, good eyesight, sharp nails. transformation feels like fire. I bet it's a dragon or any other fire breathing lizard...wouldn't say classic (since I'm actually seeing this for the 1at time) but still it's a classic
realfan16 chapter 2 . 2/23
oi! what were they doing Fred and George. igh There's nothing that sets me off more than censored content TT_TT just knowing that something happened but not exactly has me screaming in outrage...sigh
SmilingAnne chapter 62 . 1/6
I wonder if Harry adopted Hulk as a separate person, too?...
dragonwriter24cmf chapter 62 . 11/17/2022
Love this story. Hope to see more of it someday, when Real Life or whatever else settles down...
heavenlyyfather chapter 62 . 11/13/2022
OH MY GODDDDD… My friend, , I absolutely enjoy this story and would sincerely appreciate it if you continued. I understand that you have a life outside of this and more than likely have something important to do, but if possible please update! I love this story to death!
Taiga Hibari chapter 45 . 10/17/2022
I always like the Harry/Logan pairing
ShadowedAuthor chapter 61 . 10/15/2022
This is my second time reading all the way through this story and it was just as good, maybe even better, the second time around. I'd forgotten about Metis, so when I remembered, it was... impactful. All of the Marvel comics stuff that you've included around the MCU content was also great.

It's been a few years but I know sometimes authors do return from the shadows. Regardless of whether you choose to continue this story, I wanted to say thank you for this wonderfully long and creative story.

I really would like to know what happened to Fenris/Fenrir and if Jormungandr would have shown up.

(I was going to leave my review in the last chapter but apparently I've already left a review there).
Guest chapter 62 . 10/12/2022
Please update I'm really loving this book
tchen8165 chapter 62 . 7/27/2022
will you ever update again?
leoka1996 chapter 10 . 6/24/2022
i am absolutely loving your fic !
very good grasp of the language, good writing flow, nice dialogues and character development and most of all, apart from two things, any changes to canon are explained through your storytelling! :)

now to my hopefully constructive criticism...there are two things in this story that as they are make absolutely no sense to me:

1. ron & far as i understand the world you are creating is canon until the summer holidays between the 4th and 5th year when harry does the animagus transformation. how then did those two get together? im not saying you have to make a chapter out of it and narrate the whole thing, but an explanation so the readers arent confused would be warranted.

2. the mom & dad thing...apart from the fact there is no real explanation in the story for this either, as somebody that is studying psychology and has a friend in similar circumstances i can tell you this makes no bloody sense. children, especially orphans, that are abused do not trust easily. even more so when abused by their own family. one of the few accurate things about canon harry is the idolisation of his parents. its something that happens to abused orphans that know their parents loved them or in this case even sacrificed their life for them.
so even if your harry found out that sirius is his father calling other people mum and especially dad a few weeks after his his biological father died is absurd...even more since he doesnt know these people enough to, as an abused orphan, form such a relationship with them. you seem to forget that harry has only spent what amounts to maybe! a few months worth of school holidays with them!

sorry if number 2 became a bit of a rant but as i said i have a friend in similar circumsatnces so this was a bit personal chapter 62 . 6/18/2022
Hello I doubt you will ever finish this story it is so good and I love it but if you don't it's fine with me I'll just leave the rest of my imagination okay that's all
pop pup chapter 20 . 6/2/2022
Okay thats weird my names in here and ive never seen anybody else with it. im kinda realy excited about that lol.
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