Reviews for Blade of Emptiness, Maelstrom of Honor
Demon-Slasher chapter 5 . 12/7/2013
Ulquiorra seems a bit too emotional, but I guess this is to be expected as he's merged again with Naruto. I honestly think this is the first story that makes Naruto appear slightly schizophrenic, but a change is good.
I hope that later on, you make it so that Ulquiorra regains his original strength and more and someday you'll show to Segunda Etapa, possibly against Madara.
jinx777 chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
coronadomontes chapter 5 . 11/30/2013
un fasinante capitulo
Wyrtha chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
Actually I'm a little disappointed even though he managed to mask it for the most part, that he showed such emotion. Then again I enjoyed his actions. Nice chapter. Although I don't care for him saving Tsunade ... though it's been awhile so maybe I'm misremembering the 1st chapter.
King of Bad Naming Sense chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
I really can't seem to understand the thought process here. Is Ulquiorra different part of Naruto, are they same person or is he kind of different being born from Naruto?
Sinclaire Silverfang chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
IronWolfe chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
The gherk? Definitely a different feel from the other stories like this. Teuchi and Ayame were definitely not expected. Can't wait to read more.
animeman12 chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
I must admit this story gives a new twist on a well used plot. I like it.
Couple questions though:
1. I understand that Naruto is influencing Ulquiorra... but why did he immediately snap when Ayame called him Naruto? I don't really think that, even with the influence of the emotional melting pot that is Naruto, Ulquiorra would really snap like that... but that's just what I think.
2. Will this turn out like some of the other 'Naruto turned Ulquiorra returns to the Elemental Nations three years after Naruto dies' stories in that Mei will jump into an alliance with Suna and Ulquiorra because he's distantly related to her? Though I can't remember if that's actually canon its in just about EVERY story with this general plot that I've read, and quite frankly its getting old. Will there be any divergence from this?
3. Given that I doubt your Hinata will just accept that Ulquiorra is Naruto, even with Ayame claiming this to be fact and Ulquiorra's own agreement, how will he prove it to her? I can understand if you decide to do a 'What was the last thing I said to Naruto?' questioning, but again for what you've said the pairing is going to slow going before its really kicks off so I think that some skepticism with Ulquiorra actually being Naruto would be more realistic.
I personally like your Hinata, given the circumstances that you've laid out. It seems more realistic for her to close off her emotions following his death, and that would change most people.
And finally... it only took four clicks to follow, favorite, and review... eight if you add it to a community. Keep up the good work... and don't expect long reviews for any other reviews I post, the length of this one is shocking me greatly.
Dusk Raider chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
tell you one thing about this hinata she can definitely take care of herself she will never take shiat from anyone now. good story loving it
Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
It was nice to see an update on this story. Happy Thanksgiving!
OoOXylionOoO chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
Great work :
God Of Cake chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
Great chapter :D
kuroshiro spade chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
please update
LelouchXKallen chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
These stories piss me off why don't you try something that's not naruhina
LelouchXKallen chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
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