Reviews for Melody of beasts
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
That was so hot! I hope Orochimaru and Itachi meet again. Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!
Alicia Lalla chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 creepy as I initially thought of Orochimaru to be I actually quite liked him in this fic! :o And I like how well written and grammatically safe it was~ Tbh I am tired of finding fics with bad grammar and nw I'm off to raid the rest of your fics XD Also my favourite couple is SasuIta but I was kinda craving an OroIta and this satisfied my OroIta craving. Keep up the magnificent work Mettlei-san! :D
LacrimosaSama chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
So, to begin.. I've never liked Orochimaru and his horrible forbidden sticky tongue... I've never liked Orochimaru and I was kind of afraid when I started reading this but I'm glad I did!
The beginning with Ita and Sasu is so cute, I loved it!
And then there was the scene between my lover and this... snake. But I liked it because of the non-con (non-con makes everything *.*) and Itachi's POV, it's always really sexy when you're in the uke's point of view
And how perverted, Sasuke coming in the classroom right after they did what they did... cute innocent boy .
Another hot OS and thank you for making me reconcile with... the snake-man...
ShilvaA chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
I really really want these two to meet again! This fic was hot and so well written. I loved it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Incredibly hot! Orochimaru was so slimy and dangerous here xD the blood and roughness combined with Orochimaru's slithering elegance makes this one a gem. Itachi being manipulated into submission was too hot xD Particularly great use of language in this one; thanks for sharing! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Itachi knew he wanted it when he walked in, he just didn't know he needed it so badly... but Orochimaru knew all too well ;3
MadaSasu chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I want a sequel! V33333333333333333333333333333333 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! two shot two shot two shot! :DD
Beist chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
This is so hot! Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
can you make more of OroIta and SasuIta? I luv them so much!
Kyuubigurl74 chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
This is a great fanfiction! I love how you incorporated Itachi's stotic, prideful domineer into this.
Rhaziell chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
My sweet Meti
You've done it again! *fangirl squeeeeeeeel*
This story was hot, exciting and i couldn't help but smirk when i was riding the buss with all the people staring at me like i was a freak for snickering and turning red while reading this!
I loved it hun! Keep on the good work!
mangaluver chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Man I have to tell you I usually hate when people make Orochimaru a pervert in stories I feel it's so over done and annoying (and not just because I'm a fan of him). But man oh man do you do it so right, you make him a perv but not a bad perv if that makes any sense. You also make him sooooo attractive and fun to read!

"What a sharp tongue... tell me Itachi, do you use it to please women or men?" The most perfect line ever!

Itachi gasped his hips rushing forwards. "I can destroy you." Itachi gasped and he really mean it too but at the same time he realised that it was a poor try to get away, once more it seemed Orochimaru knew it was that way, the malicious grin stretched wider as the man leaned close till Itachi felt hot breaths on his parted lips.

Nervously he licked his lips unable to close his eyes when Orochimaru looked at him as if trying to see inside of him.

"And I can break you." Orochimaru's tongue sneaked out sliding on Itachi's lower lip, the yellowish eyes had become mere dangerous slits.

That whole sequence gave me such feels, as horrible as it makes me sound it did!

I love the oroita pairing it so rare you find a good one, and boy do you do it well, I just want more and more from you. This is one I'll definitely go back and re-read over and over and over again and I so want a sequel!

Sorry this is not one of the better reviews I've left before, but man my mind is blown I can't even organize my thoughts, well done my friend well done.

This was excellent!
Bloodred 321 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Love it was so hot I've never pictures that paring but you've open my eye.
Hikaru'ttebayo chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Congratulations on another awesomely written story!
I loved...pretty much everything about it. I really enjoyed how you started the whole thing, with those cute interactions between Itachi and Sasuke. Itachi being all protective of his little brother is one hell of a cute thing! Actually made me crave for some ItaSasu actions, but as soon as I started reading over the OrochimaruXItachi part I totally forgot about it again. This one is really such a hot piece of smut! I loved how you depicted Itachi's inner riot about what was going on and I loved how you made Orochimaru one confident, dirty bastard who just takes whatever he wants.
The actual sex scene was soo fucking hot. I love it when there's blood involved and I just enjoyed all of this rough play way too much. You really managed to make me want more!
I also very much liked how you let everything come to an end. Sasuke actually bumping into Itachi in Orochimaru's class room was a really nice idea. I was already waiting for another interaction between Itachi and Orochimaru at that point and I feel like you really chose the perfect last sentence for Orochimaru to say.
Altogether I really enjoyed this fanfiction, you actually made me like Orochimaru in this one. You're awesome as always!
Your highly devoted follower,
loverofakatsuki chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Even though I wasn't expecting Orochimaru to get was HOT!

TOO hot actually lol
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