Reviews for A Flower In The Mist
speedrunner chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Best part in the story is definitely when Asuma thought that he'd always choose 'revenge mad murderer' over 'attractive, emotional blonde' any day hahaha :D

Hmmm. I do thought that there should be ... more resistance from Asuma when Ino confessed. Or at least another paragraph showing us his musing about how the whole thing was rather ... inappropriate?

Anyway, all's well that ends well :D you have wrote this story well and AsuIno is something I will never get tired of! :D
Stunning Sunset chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I loved it. It was simple and beautiful. No need for sickeningly sweet declarations of love, sometimes just a few words will do, just like in this case. Good job!
gabriella.rochamartins chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Beautiful .
ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Great job!
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
i like it!