This whole story was honestly one of the best fics I’ve read in a while, really good job. I hope to see you post more writing in the future. Best of luck

He plays Bioshock!?

Okay, all I can say is wow. I wasn't sure what to expect going into this fic; I saw that it was long, incomplete, and hadn't been updated in quite some time. But for someone who has stated their new to writing fanfiction, this completely blew me out of the water!

Where to begin. The way you write is just so lovely. You possess an excellent way with words that made every sentence a true pleasure to enjoy. I just have to assume that you have experience writing outside fanfiction!

And this story, my goodness. I'm typically a little wary about any EriSol fix that paints them in anything but a pitch rivalry, but you've managed to hang onto the way that they butted heads, weave in such sweet romance, and just made it work! I can't remember the last time I've felt so satisfied reading about a growing relationship; I think back to how their relationship began and find myself just so pleased! I lack a talent with words to adequately describe how I adore the way they've both grown over the course of 51 chapters.

This has made me laugh, cry, gasp, sigh, groan, and really pulled so many emotions out of me. To me, that is a mark of a truly wonderful fic. Your character portrayal was wonderful, from their mannerisms and down to the ways they spoke. And just using quirks to their speech, but really creating sentences that sounded like they really came from those characters!

I have so much praise for this story. I've been absolutely hooked since I've found it, even squeezing in a chapter or two at work when I could get away with it. But the more I read, the more I came to regret becoming so hooked, knowing that there was no resolution to be had. Alas, I knew that would be the case going in, but I proceeded anyway. It really sounds like so much has been happening in your personal life, and I truly hope that you've been finding things easier now. Never feel guilty for putting your life and what you need ahead of what is ultimately a small obligation, so despite this one fan's remorse, don't beat yourself up over these things. Ending or no, this was an absolutely wonderful read and I'm glad for the emotional ride it has been. That said, of course my heart would just leap out of my chest with jubilation if I were to ever see a notification for this story.

I could go on and on, but I think I've rambled on enough! This is an amazing read you've made, and thank you for pushing yourself as far as you have to share your plan for those hopeless idiots as far as you have.

Cheers, love!

it's an amaziing story.

This story was probably my favorite. This story made me cry so much. While reading the last few chapter of this story I listened to the song Colors by Halsey. This story was absolutely beautiful in all aspects of the word. I love you and I love your work.

This is so good! When will it update?

i love your story. i hope that the next chapter will come out soon

all i have to say i that i love this fic its amazing and awesome keep up the good work

So... what now?
Is the story over?
Will there be a sequel?
Will you revert to being Satan and hurt them again?
Who knows?

omfg please carry on writing this it's honestly so good 3

Get well soon!
/back injuries are literally the only thing worse than broken knees, I salute you for continuing to write this!/

AAAAAAAAH I'm so glad they're starting to get along again! I can't even express how happy you've made me!

love shaun of the dead and speedy. kinda wish sol had got a hit or 2 in b4 eridan got there.
yay! they are going out!

oh no! what happened? eridan!

*cries* I started reading and I'm like oh thank goodness it was just a dream and now sollux is going to do the right thing and barbosa isn't really dead. But then you kill by making it true! And then poor little tuna-bee! *sob* and the tub and his dad and oh my glob!