Reviews for Fortuna
Miratete chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Wow...sad and scary and full of "Whatever were you thinking, Calhoun?"
TheAngryTaco chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
*starts story*
Welp. I know where this is going...

*finishes story*
Called it.

A little short and chopped up for my taste, but the emotional flavor is still there and you got the characters exactly right. Nice work.
BackForBreakfast chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
What a great idea for a plot! Really well-written and I enjoyed the shocking ending - makes the whole incident even sadder. Nicely done!
Umbre0n chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Oh Keelah, why would you write this? It hurts my heart! All cute and adorable, then BAM, it gets real. Someone needs to draw Cal and Fortuna though, that'd be nice.
Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
oh that was so sad :( that makes the whole backstory even sadder than it already was!