Oh my goodness! I know this story is years old and who knows if you’ll even get the alert for this review but after reading the two chapters that were here, I am actually quite sad now that it was never finished. I mean, I just finished watching the Sopranos for the first time so mob stuff is fresh in my mind so this AU is already one I am super intrigued by and it hit all the right notes for me just in terms of entertainment. That’s not to mention the solid writing from you! You know your stuff! I found it easy to read, loved the limited POV with Goten because that means you build the intrigue about the characters around him and I love it oh so much! Wonderful! If you do happen to read this, I know the chances of you returning to it are slim to none, I’m okay with that. I just couldn’t read this and not say how much I liked it.

interesting so far! update soon!

okok I love this story. Please update soon!

I feel like the only on in the universe who refers to Bra as be manga name. *holds up middle finger* FUCK YOU AMERICAN ANIME! Anyways! YES another story featuring GohBra! Love it Love Love It... (I see you lies PPL) big fave and wrote me a Caleb and Hanna Fic :)))

I don't understand. Y has the same chpt 2 been republished more than once? Its very confusing. I don't know what's changed or if everything is the same. Was Pan in chptr 2 b4?

yes, you uptaded right when i got home from vacation (: this chapter was really good and worth the wait (:
sexual tension? bulla and veggie moments? briefs? goten stalking? now i'm even more excited for the next chapter!

nice story ,haven;t read story like this before.

WOW THE STORY IS GETTING MORE INTRESTING . ITS SEEMS LIKE I AM WATCHING A MOVIE... UPDATE SOON.

Ooooooo sexual tension! Lol me and my dirty mind! Hmmmmm interesting start, Bulla must be going uncover! Is Trunks in this story or he doesn't exist? I must see him O.o Is Marron in this story too? I don't think so tbh but since I'm obsessed with T/M I had to ask lol update soon Liz! Loving this story even more :)

ohhhh I loved it Lizzie! Its like a series...u gotta finish! I gotta know! don't leave me in the dark liz! lol I loved it as far as grammar /punctuation its great it total matched with the story eager to read!

Will Trunks b in this? I hope so. Good job on the suspense I am hooked! :D

oh...my...god...THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING SO FAR! YOU GOTTA UPDATE, LIKE NOW! This reminds me of my most favorite story ever, which is Captive By Chocolateblood. It's a TrunksxMarron fic (My fav pairing) but GotenxBulla is my second! I LOVE THEM SO MUCH! (Sorry for my craziness, I'm hyper lol) YOU GOTTA UPDATE AGAIN, LIKE NOW, OR TOMORROW, OR THE NEXT HOUR, OR MINUTE, I DON'T GIVE A FLYING BLEEP. Please excuse Tiffany's mild language, within the next hour she will be fine JUST UPDATE!

whoa, this was a pretty intense prologue! i am already in love with this story. i think it is unique and will be great! i honestly don't know what's going to happen next, so please post more soon!

I already love this! Is this one of those stories that will say 'one year earlier' and go back to the events that lead to Goten dying in this chapter?

This is very Interesting, in a badass way. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Please update when you can. ;3