Reviews for Forgiveness
PearlM21 chapter 18 . 10/18/2020
Severus is being as considerate as he can, even though showing affection and care is difficult for him. The ending was really sweet. Darn Vernon!
PearlM21 chapter 17 . 10/18/2020
Yea it's understandable for him to feel a bit embarrassed about being in such bad emotional shape and so vulnerable in front of him. Most people would be.
PearlM21 chapter 16 . 10/18/2020
Such and an emotional chapter. I find it interesting when someone who died in the original universe still dies in an alternate timeline like you have here. It just makes you think about things like fate and what's out of our control.
PearlM21 chapter 15 . 10/18/2020
This chapter was amazing. Sirius redoing the house to make it nicer for the Order members to make them feel better and making Harry his own room were so sweet! Everything was going so well, but then the double whammy of a ending happened. Who the heck is coming through the door, and what the heck does Voldemort want. Dumbledoor needs to set up backup at this point, because Voldemort might just kill Snape. Even if he "just" tortures him, he can't go through that again. He's not fully recovered from the last time.
PearlM21 chapter 13 . 10/18/2020
OMG! These recues were awesome! Every part of this was so epic. It terrible so many got so injured though. Hopefully everyone will be okay. The "Eat this. It shouldn't kill you." line followed by Snape brushing it off before giving to Sirius was hilarious and a highlight in such a serious chapter. Everyone is still in such a tight position legally though. The legal system in this world is horrendous.
PearlM21 chapter 12 . 10/18/2020
Things have really gone from bad to worse. If Sirius hadn't acted so recklessly, this would not have happened. Now Harry and Snape are in deep with him. Furthermore, this was obviously a set up, so this is going to make Snape's position as a spy even worse off than it was before.
PearlM21 chapter 11 . 10/17/2020
Voldemort really is not letting up. First he invaded Harry's mind at a very inconvenient time for him, and now he sends Wormtail to Snape. With Sirius and Harry there, his cover might finally be completely blown. The hits just keep coming to everyone.
PearlM21 chapter 10 . 10/17/2020
This chapter was crazy! It was horrifying to see what Voldemort did to him in more detail, but it was really nice to see everyone coming together to help him. Albus fussing over him was especially heartwarming. I knew he'd come.
PearlM21 chapter 8 . 10/17/2020
OH my goodness. What Voldemort did to him was horrendous. I feel so bad for him. It was heartwarming to see Sirius and Harry help him like that. They should get Dumbledoor in there though. We also don't know if his cover is completely blown yet.
PearlM21 chapter 6 . 10/17/2020
LOL. They're both so emotionally draining, they're just having a drink together. Yea at this point Snape is not going to be teaching that class. Even without the alcohol he could use the day off, never mind with it. The only thing is Umbridge is covering the class, and that's always a scary prospect. Hermione and Draco would do a better job teaching it.
PearlM21 chapter 5 . 10/17/2020
I loved being able to see Harry's situation both from his and the outsiders' perspective. Snape never really had much of a nurturing model, so it's understandable he feels awkward and out of his element. He's trying, though, so that's the important thing.
PearlM21 chapter 4 . 10/17/2020
OMG! This was so intense! I never expected something this serious to happen. It was great writing though.
PearlM21 chapter 3 . 10/17/2020
Yes! Snape barging into Umbrige's office to protect any children that were in there was awesome!
PearlM21 chapter 1 . 10/16/2020
Dumbledoor randomly showing up in his coffee was one of the most amusing things ever. Having this guy as our boss must be maddening sometimes. LOL.

This is starting off really strong with a combination of both comedy and drama. The conversation between Albus and Severus was great.
Nollypoo chapter 19 . 10/2/2020
This is by far one of the best stories I've read in this fandom. Forget those people who nitpick when in reality they couldn't write anything with a fraction of the quality and emotional impact that this has. I totally understand life getting in the way, but I'll definitely hold a bit of hope that you come back to this someday! Such a beautiful story, made me cry like an absolute baby for poor Harry. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
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