| Reviews for Forgiveness |
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   Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 2 . 6/23/2013 This story shows great promise I look forward to seeing how Snaps reacts to seeing the results of his detention with Umbridge, that may be enough to start breaking the ice between the too and moving them into a more civil relationship. Will this be pairing less and focus solely on the Harry/Snape interactions or will it have that extra element to add to the story, if so my vote is for Harry/Hermione. thanks for sharing, I eagerly await your next. favorited |
| Weller4ever chapter 2 . 6/22/2013 Wonderful story so far :) |
| PlanetHannah chapter 2 . 6/22/2013 Love this so much! Can't wait to read more! |
| marchofthemadhare chapter 2 . 6/21/2013 This is really very good! I am enjoying this a lot more than I thought I would (I generally don't go for stories with Snape and Harry getting along better ) so well done! |
| the.painted.teacup chapter 2 . 6/21/2013 Another enjoyable chapter! Grammar was better this go around. The more you develop Harry and Snape, the more I find my self falling in love with this tale. Thank you! |
| Librarian73 chapter 2 . 6/21/2013 Love the story. |
| Nanettez chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 Dumbledore has been excused from Hogwarts after the DA was discovered That is a polite way of putting it! *********** This was interesting and I am looking forward to reading more of it. An interesting note: I always thought that memory Harry saw would make it clear to readers that the students did not wear a standard (muggle) school uniform under their robes but so many write about one. It is also not on the list to purchase. But that is nothing to do with your story. |
| OliveB chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 It's great! I am waiting IMPATIENTLY for more. Keep writing! :-) |
| Hobesan chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 I love OOTP and this is a very good first chapter. I am looking forward to the next one! Keeping in character will be great and I think you made these two quite believable. Frequent updates? Yes? Please? |
| the.painted.teacup chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 Keep it going! Only thing that really seemed to be an issue writing style wise is your occasional use of commas. For example, rather then end a thought and continue onto the next you would half commit to one thought, add a second in the middle after a comma, and end with the first thought; other times you would replace what should have been a period with a comma all together. Character development and portrayal I thought was spot on, although perhaps Dumbledore was a little more aggressive. Overall, a great beginning and I look forward to more. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 Excellent first chapter! I thought your characterization of Severus was spot on. You also have very good sentence structure and grammar. I can't wait for the next update! |
| Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 some of the sentences don't end with punctuation marks and *tweety voice* i tawt i taw a few run-on sendences. other than that, this is great! |